Infatuation's Shadow Over the Lake

[coffeegoeshere]

I can't stop loving you

Comments

[greatmistakes]

seems like this one and Barbecue should be together.

[coffeegoeshere]

Yeah, you know, it's funny. I think this is the fourth or fifth poem I've written set in a place that is inspired by Golden Gardens. They almost all have a woman, sailboats, mountains, water, and a barge. One of these days the material's going to wear out. Also, point of notice, I only added in the Italian after your last comment. I wanted to see if it would change things.

[greatmistakes]

adds interest for sure.

[donzela]

mmmm