MMoM Day 17: "Foundation and Empire and the Unbearable Lightness of Being", Neal, R

May 17, 2012 13:28

Title: Foundation and Empire and the Unbearable Lightness of Being
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character: kate, character: neal, rating: r, character: peter, white collar, mmom

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batgurl10 May 17 2012, 20:32:23 UTC
Every story u give us is a gift! A dirty hot little story, which makes it even better, thanks

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coffeethyme4me May 17 2012, 21:09:38 UTC
What a wonderful compliment -- thank you!!!

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elrhiarhodan May 17 2012, 21:01:12 UTC
I'm expecting - don't know what - but not this poetry.

You break my heart and put it back together. It's sexy in such a bleak, dystopian way. There's still joy, though. Because it helps Neal to survive.

Thank you is such a lackluster phrase - I am grateful beyond measure for this.

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coffeethyme4me May 17 2012, 21:10:17 UTC
{{{{{{{{{{{You}}}}}}}}}}}}}

Thank you SO MUCH.

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elrhiarhodan May 17 2012, 21:13:48 UTC
One of the things I remember about The Unbearable Lightness of Being was how upset the female protagonist was that her lover's hair always smelled of other women's bodies. She loved him anyway.

I could imagine Neal reading this and thinking of him and Kate.

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coffeethyme4me May 17 2012, 23:40:17 UTC
I should have known better than to use two books I've never actually read. ;-) Asimov is a favorite of my mother's and the other one -- well, the title really works.

So would Kate's hair smell of other women's/men's bodies? Or are you saying Kate would forgive Neal for thinking of Peter and not her? Or something else entirely that I'm not quite getting? ;-)

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embroiderama May 17 2012, 21:51:20 UTC
This is beautiful. I love every single thing about it.

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coffeethyme4me May 17 2012, 23:41:18 UTC
Wow, thank you!! (Love the apropos icon!)

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frith_in_thorns May 17 2012, 22:14:41 UTC
I really, really liked this one. It's lovely.

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coffeethyme4me May 17 2012, 23:41:38 UTC
Thanks so much!

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secretsolitaire May 18 2012, 13:13:14 UTC
Gorgeous and sad.

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coffeethyme4me May 18 2012, 22:44:40 UTC
Thank you so much, SS. I really appreciate your feedback.

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