'Cold Boy Fever' - [Uruha/Kai] 1/1

[colberry]

Title:  Cold Boy Fever
Pairing:  Uruha/Kai
Genre:  Romance, smut
Notes:  This isn't my usual style and I think my next step into smutdom will be much more.. metaphorical XD  So if you're looking for something more like my usual style, run far.. far.. away OTL 
For cateris.  It’s my first real venture into smut-land so I hope it’s okay for you!  Happy Birthday

Comments

[colberry]

Oh thank you!! I'm so relieved my first venture into smut-land wasn't a crash-and-burn failure XD;

I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[gaussianblur89]

Let me asdökfjaösdkfjsdfiouhktydkykvhöipmgk over this for a while, m'kay?

It was rough, almost dirty even, but still so delicate. They were so delicate and the feelings so sincere, omg, all my feels!
I see the beginning of the lovestory of the century or something as grand. :D
I absolutely loved this and I'm sure the birthday babe did too. :)

[colberry]

Gah, let me just flail all over your comment ♥

Thank you so much! (and I really hope she did too, haha)
I'm glad I could get all that across without it coming off really awkward (I was blushing the whole time so.. XD)

[gaussianblur89]

Nooo, let me flail further over your fic, hurhurhur~♥

(She'll have to be totally heartless to dislike this, guuuuurl.) Ahahhahha, I know how you feel. Smut still makes me terribly uncomfortable. XD I think it always will.... BUT YOU DID SO GOOD! ♥ This is so good. :D

Sent it to my memories btw. Hurhur~

[colberry]

*flails*
Gahhh, you're too kind to me ^///^

I'm pretty notorious for hiding smut beneath some fancy metaphors - soo, writing "erection" was a big step for me XDD

[colberry]

Ah, thank you so much! I'm sure your writing is lovely just the way it is ♥ ♥

[shadow_fictions]

YES THIS MAKES YOU MORE THAN AWESOME OK.

It's like a freaking masterclass in how to make porn pretty. I have so much love for this. SO MUCH.

My writing is just gonna go mope in it's corner for a bit (or a Kenzo muse might drag it out to play with ill intent) and wonder if it can be this pretty when it grows up. Seriously.

♥ ♥ ♥

[colberry]

OH GOD DOES IT REALLY? I WAS A TOMATO WHILE WRITING THIS XD;

Gahh, thank you so much! Pretty porn.. it has a ring to it XD And hush! Your writing is already so beautiful so stop this nonsense~ ♥

[shadow_fictions]

I seem to remember writing that comment at some godawful time in the morning, so all mopey comments about my writing can be held to that, lol.

YES. YES IT DOES. TESSAAAAA ♥ oh yes, I know that feeling well. I honestly do not get how people who write good smut manage to write oneshot after oneshot of it. I'm literally like :| the whole way when I try. xD

mems and adds to this longassed rec post I'm compiling... :3

[colberry]

R..Rec-list? *A*

omg I totally agree - I had on the biggest poker face in my entire existence while writing this with my unaware roommate was across the room and Britney Spears' "Toxic" blasting through my headphones (..it was for inspiration >_>)

Kudos to those who can write about naughty-bits time after time :D *salutes*

[colberry]

Oh, thank you! ♥

I'm a sucker for domesticity so I'm relieved I could convey that a little amidst the smut, haha! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)