'wide shut' - [Aoi/Uruha] 1/1

[colberry]

Title:  wide shut
Pairing:  Aoi/Uruha
Genre:  Drama, romance
Notes:  Written between 1AM and 2AM.

Synopsis: Because Aoi still presses his lips to Uruha’s shoulder when it’s over, mouthing hushed constellations into each freckle.

Comments

[yurinie]

SPOT. MINE.

[yurinie]

Okay this.

You know, it's afternoon in my country right now, and the sickening temperature doesn't make reading intense angst any better. Just. WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME WOMAN. absdbvdbvvvgdzfbvd ;_;

dark, dark,

brown - warm,

gasping his name

- Uruha kisses them shut

Some like your first lines, i like your last- they always make me realize something. It's not like closing a door completely but let it loosely open; so you can look through and maybe, if you look close enough, you'll find the other side of the string, an answer, deep down where all the twists tie /is rambling. It's just how i feel JUST IGNORE ME XD

Aoi seems to flicker as he stares at the tears in his hands, breath heavy, before he starts pushing at Uruha’s shoulders. But the alcohol is still in his bones and he’s left clutching at Uruha’s shoulder blades, squeezing so tight like maybe he could crack them apart and release crooked wings. There isn't so many of my, ultimate favourite lines in this one, but you definitely have a way with words-- all beautiful and

[colberry]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this one :D

I adore reading punch-in-the-gut ending lines so I've always tried to kinda reach for that. Plus, open-endings are my favorite :3

Haha, and that's good to hear! I try not to have my twitter be too boring or spazz-tastic :D

[lady_sb]

"And Uruha wonders what color Aoi’s eyes are when no one can see them."

Absolute love, miss your style of writing. So nice.

[colberry]

Thank you so much ♥

[xadowangel]

this was absolutely beautiful. Loved it to bits! Every single emotion, i could feel and i can't deny that i'm almost crying....

[colberry]

Aww, thank you so much! I actually just stumbled upon "TOXIC" yesterday and it's such a beautiful read - I'll have to properly comment on it when I find time :)

♥

[bellcheria]

Excuse you lady, but I don’t see a sense in writing such things in the middle of a sunny day. These stories are meant for the night, for the dawn, for the twilight. For grey days. Knowing that this came to you at 1-2 am makes it just better, more perfect.

And ugh, drunk!Aoi!! Better than the constant mention of our tipsy tall wonder, loved it. Also the way you described Uruha’s hiding out andjkasdhsdjkasdjk yes~ Angry Aoi DKHADAK fuck yeah~

He tries to forget.
iv.
He doesn’t.

The whole rest is a messy/clear sort of mess. Sometimes they see, sometimes they look right at each other and don't see shit. It's like trying to cut off a bad habit which can be sometimes good to your body.

AH. I like this a lot, my dear <3 Your way of writing is one of my faves and I sometimes try very hard to copy LOL;

[colberry]

Haha, yeahhh this is definitely an "after-dark" sort of piece.. :3

That's how I tend to look at them sometimes - a bad habit, a withdrawal. They're just so wonderful to write with an aching heart in mind~

Fuu~ Thank you so much, love! and no need to copy me, your writing is beautiful just the way it is ♥

[shadow_fictions]

your writing makes me want to draw. ♥

and oh dear me I think I love this a bit more than is possibly sane.
(but it fits the weather, so 8D)

oh oh oh, Aoi drags Hitsugi (and Kazuki and Mizuki and Chiyu and - )
idk why I loved that line so much, lol. There are so many, many gorgeous lines in this ♥

♥

[colberry]

Oh, you're always too kind to me.. ♥

Thank you so much, love - your comments always brighten my day :)