'crack in the ceiling' - [Uruha/Kai, etc] 1/?

[colberry]

Title: crack in the ceiling
Description: In which Kai promises him as he watches his eyes bleed into silver, “You were happy once.”
Pairings: Kai/Uruha, Aoi/Ruki, Reita/Ruki
Genre: Drama, romance, supernatural
Notes:  For uruai's KU Summer Challenge :D

Comments

[arubai]

I have so much I want to say but all of it can basically can be summed up in one line.... I can tell that this is going to be epic :3

[colberry]

Ahh, thank you so much! I'm going to try my best to live up to that expectation ♥

[colberry]

Thank you!

Ah, sorry for the confusion! I was trying to just plop the reader straight into the action and then have a slow reveal, rather than being upfront about it :D I'm glad everything was clear by the end :D

♥

[colberry]

Thank you for reading/commenting!

And yes, I'm gathering a lot of people were confused OTL I was trying to do a slow reveal, rather than being upfront about what was going on, but I might have bitten off more than I could chew lol. I'm glad everything was understood by the end, though!

I'll do my best! ♥

[sarky_chepooka]

At first I was like

"What the hell am I reading?!"

And by the end I was like

"Omg this is amazing I wish I had thought of this!"

I REALLY love the idea behind this! The Aoi/Ruki bit was heartbreaking ;_; and I'm already hoping that Aoi will eventually get what he so desperately wants ^^;

I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!

[colberry]

Ahh, thank you so much!

I'm so glad the confusion waned throughout the chapter - I was trying to do a slow reveal and have the reader deduce a little bit :)

I'll do my best to write quickly! ♥

[puss_nd_boots]

The very gradual reveal of what was going on was stunningly done - at first, the reader is completely lost in confusion, and then bit by bit, the picture emerges. By the end, you know exactly what's going on, and you're left in awe. Wonderful start, I'm very interested to see where this is going!

[colberry]

Oh, thank you so much! I was nervous that it would be too confusing and the reader wouldn't be able to grasp everything by the end, but I'm so relieved all went well :D

I'm so glad you enjoyed ♥