'i'm not a miracle.' - [Aoi/Uruha] 1/1

[colberry]

Title:  i'm not a miracle.
Pairing:  Aoi/Uruha, implied past Aoi/Yune
Genre:  Romance, drama
Warnings:  ...blatant blasphemy xD
Notes:  Inspired by DRIPPING INSANITY and GABRIEL ON THE GALLOWS.

Synopsis:  It's like purple wine and old cigarettes burning their gums; like Yune slamming open the door and catching Uruha's heated, half-mast gaze over Aoi's

Comments

[liedxxx]

BECAUSE SENPAI HAS POSTED, I MUST COMMENT LIKE A GOOD KOUHAI.
Okay while reading, I was like "oh my god this is so beautiful adfjjfk;asdkj;sadkj;sfd"

He makes wishes to each vein and maybe God is somewhere inside the scarlet-purple lines that crisscross their hearts as fiberglass slices their parted lips and Aoi croons and begs and please-god.

AUGHHGHGAHHAHAHHHWEHAHEAHS NOO WHY DO YOU STRING TOGETHER WORDS SO HEAVENLY. tbh, every time I read your stuff, I cry like there's no tomorrow. ;,D

[colberry]

OMG I NEVER REALIZED THIS WAS YOUR LJ NAME ALL ALONG \8D/

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it (even though I feel bad my writing sometimes makes you cry omg ;A;) ♥ ♥

[rosswen91]

hey, i couldn't find the comment part for a while, and i really get frustrated! :D
anyways, i actually, don't like this couple so much, but, this piece of work was beautifully written! i liked it so much!
thank you so much for writing, and sharing this!

[colberry]

Oh, thank you so much! The fact that you enjoyed it despite not liking the pairing too much really means so much to me - I'm so happy you liked it :) ♥

[mittilla]

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL THAT I JUST IWODJ[AWEIHD[WE9IHDWE[I9F
OK I AM STILL LIKE O.O
ok, I really loved all of it ah, I am glad u got such inspiration from the songs, now I will remember about this every time i listen to them wow xD

[colberry]

ASDFGHJKJHGFD THANK YOU, LOVE! ♥
*squishes you* \8D/

[invisiblehabits]

This is...I'm not sure what words to us. It's powerful more than beautiful, strong more than soft, but I'm not sure I can ever chose between heartfelt or passionate... 99 times out of 100 I detest Uruha as a bottom, he's too strong and masculine character beneath the makeup t fit the role, but you allowed him an odd sort of shattered strength even in his submissive state. I quite love it. One of my favourite things are the hints backwards, to Yune. I wish I could know more of what happened between them, all three of them, back then. But somehow it's one of those wishes I'm not sure I want to have fulfilled, because the questions are so beautiful when unanswered.

Thank you for sharing this, it was a strangely beautiful read, weirdly empowering even for an atheist with the twisted pleas to God. Really, thank you.

[colberry]

Oh, thank you so much. You perfectly captured everything I wanted this piece to convey and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I agree - I usually refrain from having Uruha as a bottom for those exact reasons, but I've always believed that it can reveal a certain strength too :)

Thank you so much again ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Oh most definitely! Submitting is a sign of trust, and it can be a display of great strength to bottom -- especially if you don't do it normally. At least that's how I see it. I actually love reversed roles for this exact reason, to see the stronger more dominant character willingly submit to his partnetr. But it needs to be done right, and you did it perfectly!

[colberry]

Ah, thank you so much! (and that's such a beautiful analogy - I just feel so honored ♥)