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[colberry]

I've always wanted to write this certain idea..

It struck maybe a year ago and the plot still hasn't left me.  I still open up the outline I created for it, add a little line here and there, and try to flesh out the characters and add in more twists, etc.  Usually, I fot down a random plot idea, abandon it, return to it maybe a couple months later

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[hamartias]

I'm not sure how to put my thoughts into words but from my understanding of what I've read so far, it has a kind of Bicentennial Man aspect to it wherein it seems like Aoi would learn and grow as a person (er, robot).

I like the premise and the excerpts, it's unique and interesting. I'd definitely read it if you were to continue. I think it has a lot of potential, in regards to plot and possible themes that you could explore. :)

[imphotasy]

It's too good. I really want to read the whole thing! The idea is just amazing.

[cursedhurricane]

OhmyGod so in love with this! The 2nd snippet brought tears to my eyes.
Just write it, tons of it then post it so I don't have to wait forever for an update.
I miss your angst <3

[inuashley813]

Yes. So much yes. I love your out-of-the-box ideas, and I'd be thrilled to read more of this~ Do continue if you feel up to it~ : )

[wp_wolfpaws]

I think you should do this. This has a pretty interesting plot and characterization (robot!Aoi gaining human feelings through the experience of taking care of disfigured!Uruha, who's losing the will to live). I'm sure there're some similarities when it comes to the plot of an interaction between AI and human but it's how the story progress that makes it interesting on its own :)

I especially loved the 2nd part of the snippet when Aoi is sort of 'reporting' on Uruha's condition to Reita. Also, on reita's reaction when Aoi said that he was watching over uruha as he sleeps (which I think is really sweet of him, even though that was a request on Uruha's part)

Really hope you can expand this to a full blown chaptered fic. I'll be waiting for this ;)