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colddustgirl

Ficlet | SPN | Red Moon Rising

Jul 16, 2009 20:14

Title: Red Moon Rising
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam and Dean.
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Set mid Season 4. Spoilers for the end of Season 3.
Diclaimer: I don't own anything.
Summary: Sam thinks a bit too much.

For the prompt 'communication,' given to me by ratherbe4gotten.

( The silence between them is immense, deep, and practically tangible. )

supernatural, genfic, fanfic

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colddustgirl July 17 2009, 23:52:49 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

Ohhh, an astronomer! I love the stars and astronomy, but unfortunately I know very little about them. I just like the beauty. :)

may7fic July 23 2009, 03:28:49 UTC

This was just wonderful. I loved its rhythm and Sam's thoughts, his mindset here feels perfect to me. I rode the wave of Sam's emotions during their talk, shared his hope when Dean opened up the lines of communication and felt crushing despair when he shut them down as quickly. It's the moon, Sam damn near made me wept. Which means you did one helluva job with this ~ thank-you!

colddustgirl July 23 2009, 19:02:36 UTC

Aww, thank you so much! I was a bit nervous about this piece--it was sort of my way of getting into the feel of writing Sam. I'm glad that I did all right!