Bohemian Rhapsody Commentary

[coldthermistor]

Title: Bohemian Rhapsody
Fandom: Inception
Rating: NC-17, just to be safe.
Characters: Arthur, Cobb, Eames, Ariadne
Summary: Done for inception_kink prompt. Inception x Kurohitsuji. Cobb is the best extractor in the world. Arthur is the best at what he does, working for Cobb as his demonic point man and bound to devour Cobb’s soul by a contract.

Comments

[lee_jung_wang]

wow those notes are really extensive XD
Gradually, from the the beginning to the end, you've made Arthur open up more and become less stoic in his face and his dialogue. It's ver interesting seeing him progress from acting like a demon to a human (acting human but at the same time, not-do you get it? cause the dialogue and actions are leaning towards human with a hint of demon left, like the eyes and some words in the dialogue that just scream not human)...what a run-on
Basically, your details were crazy and wonderful and lovely and so gooood.

[coldthermistor]

Thanks (:

Glad you enjoyed this! (:

Huh.

[amsuhl]

1. (To Lee-jung-wang) Coincidence, seeing you here. You reviewed my ff account (snowsybaris) just a day ago? Or so. Fancy that. (Waves

Re: Huh.

[coldthermistor]

Thanks (:

Well, yes, but the crossover was a challenge, so I didn't regret it. Making a good crossover is always hard, so I'm already surprised a lot of people were willing to give it a try (:

I read someone's commentary before, and realised it was fun to do. It's nice to see where you write like someone, and how different the fic could have been - and how much the changes worked for you ;)

Sorry, it's late too, so I'm babbling.

I'm glad you liked it (:

[astarael_7th]

Why hello fellow Singaporean! xD
Just a quick comment to tell you that I really really enjoyed this piece. The character development was wonderful, and all the details! (:
(I'm hoping the assassins AU that I claimed can be as epic as yours...but you are so pro.(:)
Thank you for this lovely piece! xD

[coldthermistor]

Hey, thanks man (:

Glad you liked it! I am so following that assasins AU because I'm sure it's gonna be awesome. AND AND -

Are you a Garth Nix fan? Abhorsen fan? Sabriel? Lirael? Astarael the seventh bell, the waker, right? xD *excites*

[astarael_7th]

Ahahaha WHY YES I AM xD
Yup, it's the seventh bell. The weeper. The one that calls all into Death. (:
(And are you a Kuroshitsuji fan too? *excites*)

[coldthermistor]

YES! xD

OMG haven't seen a Garth Nix fan around in ages, although I've seen a few Kurohitsuji fans around! xD