A Good Day To Die

Jun 11, 2011 04:31

Title: A Good Day To Die
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Bant Eerin (mentioned), Garen Muln, Kyp Durron, Mace Windu, Obi-Wan Kenobi (mentioned)
Summary: Garen thinks about growing old, and faces the likelihood of his own death. A Jedi's life is sacrifice. Set in the Destroyer of Worlds universe.
Note: Possible (implied) character death ( Read more... )

kyp durron, mace windu, obi-wan kenobi, garen muln, bant eerin, star wars, fanfiction, destroyer of worlds

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ladyhadhafang June 10 2011, 20:36:28 UTC
#Prays for everyone involved in the mission.

Seriously, that was great! :D #Envies your ability to write action scenes. Seriously. :)

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coldthermistor June 10 2011, 20:45:19 UTC
(They're screwed, you know ;) ) j/k

Thanks! :D Action's always fun, IMO. Ok, it's gratituous self-indulgence, but still...>_< sometimes...

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ladyhadhafang June 10 2011, 20:49:35 UTC
XD

You're welcome. :)

Action's always fun, IMO. Ok, it's gratituous self-indulgence, but still...>_< sometimes...

*This*. Seriously. I love action scenes. :) Unfortunately, I can't write them to save my life. :(

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darth_eldritch June 10 2011, 21:58:19 UTC
You make the Yuuzhon Vong more impressive than any of the books I've read on them.

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coldthermistor June 11 2011, 07:39:02 UTC
Is that a good thing? ;) j/k

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darth_eldritch June 11 2011, 12:28:32 UTC
It's a very good thing!

After reading x many books on the Vong they got boring, and I wasn't really accepting of them in the first place because 1) they were apparently immune to the Force and that seems to go against the general definition of the Force 2) they sound like the Githyanki from D&D.

Here they seem truly alien and terrifying, and the characters have no idea what they are up against.

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coldthermistor June 11 2011, 13:08:10 UTC
Awesome :D

Yeah, the Force-immunity really got me, and I felt it wasn't necessarily very well-explained. How the Force-immunity worked, I mean anyway. LOL good point - now you mention it, I *do* think of the Githyanki!

Yep. And to make things worse, they're not at all certain they can trust the only (dead) person who knew anything about them...*cough* Palpatine *cough*...

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