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[Fic] All That I Am - 10/12

Aug 30, 2010 16:10

Title: All That I Am
Author: Coley Merrin
Rating: R
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Genre: AU, Romance

Summary: To find a date that Kyuhyun can stomach is impossible - unless they hire one to pretend. But not even the perfect companion can stop years worth of threats, or keep their acting from becoming all too real.

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pairing: qmi, fic: super junior, fic: allthatiam

Comments 93

chrysa August 30 2010, 23:11:30 UTC

spot~

chrysa September 1 2010, 04:03:37 UTC

Guh this chapter. It broke my heart when Zhou Mi started crying in front of the board. ): And then Kyuhyun realizing he wanted Zhou Mi to want to stay with him, just, guh. They were both moving towards that, but this development really sped up the realizations for both of them.

I'm surprised you had Kyuhyun saved by the end of this chapter, actually! I was expecting it be a little more drawn out, even though that... would be bad for my sanity. Though Mimi+gun. *g* Is Kyuhyun going to ask him about it? Probably? XD

coley_merrin September 8 2010, 00:37:12 UTC

Yeah :( Gah, Mi. There isn't much denying the things they wanted, the things they'd give anything to hold onto. <3

I'm sure it would've been bad for my sanity, too. XD If this had been a book and not a fic, perhaps, buuut... lol. Crime things make my blood run cold. Much better with sap. XD Er. By varying opinion~

Thank you~! <3

pumpkingelatin August 30 2010, 23:17:24 UTC

shpot :0

pumpkingelatin September 1 2010, 13:57:09 UTC

AIVFNDVISDUB FVIHYBAEOIDSFHVBAIDSUBVNC IH!!!!!!!11!!!ONE!!!ELEVEN!!!

that's about all my brain can say right now D:

coley_merrin September 8 2010, 00:37:33 UTC

*gives your brain a cookie* <3 It's okay! :)

Thank you~! <3

rayneweather August 30 2010, 23:35:44 UTC

SWEET!!! Zhou Mi to the rescue. Nothing hotter than a guy with a gun & who knows how to use it. That was very brave of Mr. Lee to come and tell the guys in a round about way where Kyu was. Guess a bunch of the board members were in on it but once it became a little too violent Mr. Lee couldn't go through with it any more. What a scary thing for Kyu to go through. Zhou Mi was his main concern and also the rock that got him through all of this. I don't think it'll be too long before their fake relationship becomes a real one. Kyu is really smart to know that a contract will never hold Zhou Mi in a real relationship if he doesn't want to be there. Some people would be so desperate to hold onto the one they love they would still try that. There are still a lot of questions that are going to need answering in the next chapter ( ... )

coley_merrin September 8 2010, 01:27:11 UTC

:)~~ Yes, the board. Sigh. Kyu had something to think about to help him. <3 And there is no contract that would give him the things he wants and needs. <3 Seeing how they hold on together, and get over those obstacles. <3

It's really been a joy to write them... Imagining all the little things they do. <3 I'm so glad you've enjoyed them. :) Now I just have to get some more done, lol. XD~ <3

Thank you~! <3

jessie3400 August 30 2010, 23:42:27 UTC

Aahhh!! Only two more chapters!!

I'm so glad kyuhyun's okay though! Zhou Mi's so hardcore with his gun~

and ooo, can't wait to hear about Zhou Mis past, is it tragic?

coley_merrin September 8 2010, 01:35:00 UTC

Tragic Mi pasts would make me cry. :( But Mi would totally be so...sigh. <3

Thank you~! <3

jessie3400 September 8 2010, 01:45:17 UTC

Tragic Mi past would probably make me cry too~ ='(

and I must be delusional, I put two more chaps instead of one in my comment, sorry for the mistake!

jessie3400 September 8 2010, 01:54:20 UTC

Ugh, I really am delusional, for some reason I thought this was the 11th chapter. Ugh, something's seriously wrong with my head~

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coley_merrin September 8 2010, 01:35:25 UTC

We might see a little more. :) :) <3 But I couldn't hold it out for long~

Thank you~! <3