[Fic] All That I Am - 11/12

[coley_merrin]

Title: All That I Am
Author: Coley Merrin
Rating: R
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Genre: AU, Romance

Summary: To find a date that Kyuhyun can stomach is impossible - unless they hire one to pretend. But not even the perfect companion can stop years worth of threats, or keep their acting from becoming all too real.

Comments

[aprilsfool6]

/sobs

Not going to write a coherent comment... But just stopping by to say that I loved this chapter.

I'm glad that Kyuhyun realized that despite the ommission on Zhoumi's resume, Zhoumi really cares for him... and that Zhoumi is now something that Kyuhyun needs in his life.

Cannot wait to find out what happens in the last chapter.

[coley_merrin]

<3<3 I'm so glad that you enjoyed it~~ <3

It's definite that when they started, that Zhou Mi (much less Kyuhyun) never expected that they would ever become more than employer and employee. And they can learn about all those things now. <3

Thank you~! <3

[rayneweather]

THE ANGST AT THE BEGINNING!!! Sorry for the capslock. The fight in the hospital just killed me. Of all the bone-headed, stupid things Kyu could have done sending Zhou Mi away over an imagined lie is about the worst. Even Leeteuk speaking sense couldn't get through to him. At least he realized it right away even though he wouldn't act on it and instead let it eat him up. Teuk is the master planner; Kyu's life would absolutely suck if he wasn't there. I'm glad Mimi was able to take the first steps toward reconciliation, with a bit of a push from Teuk. Even though Mi could have said a thousand other things when he handed the cufflinks over, what he said certainly was effective. It showed that Kyu really was special to him - that he couldn't give up something that to others would be a trivial, insignificant gift because it was chosen & given by Kyu himself. It took a lot of guts for Kyu to come to the restaurant; it would be interesting to see what went on in his head in the hours between the meeting in the office & him showing

[coley_merrin]

Hehe, don't worry about the capslock. XD \o/

I guess Kyu has stress and being drugged to blame a little. XD He can excuse himself a bit. You hope they'd have figured it out without Teuk's intervention like big boys, but you never know. XD Teuk didn't want to live with Kyuhyun otherwise. XD;;;

Kyu was more to him than an item, but it was a tangible thing that was from Kyuhyun...as though it was the love that he really did want. ;___; <3 Their risks paid off at least~~ <3

Thank you~! <3

[metafora89]

Okay. So I've been reading almost all of your fics, and I've been following "Black Satin" and "All That I Am" chapter by chapter. And this is the first time I comment. But I've been suffering through the whole chapter, so we're even? (okay, we're not, you can hate me now -.-)

What can I say? I have really enjoyed reading this fic, because I like it when Kyuhyun is a cold bastard and Zhou Mi is still his charming self XD It's like they are meant to each other (because they are) and I'm so glad Kyuhyun finally realized that he needs Zhou Mi... that he wants Zhou Mi with him.

I love the way you describe feelings, because you make them sound so real it sometimes hurts. But I'm a masochist, so I am the happiest when you update.

I'm looking forward to reading the final chapter. Sweet, sweet QMi.

P.S. Do you mind if I follow you on Twitter? It'll be easier for me to stalk you, I suppose...

[coley_merrin]

Aww, no worries~ <3

It's fun to play with facets of their personalities. XD We all have a lot of different interpretations~ But their need just shone through for them. <3

I'm really glad any of the feelings seem real. I'm glad those things that seem to be real in my head work out. <3<3

And of course you can follow on twitter~ <3 Let me know if there's something in particular you want to see~

Thank you~! <3

[kwonmisun]

*Grins*

When they did that half break up thing, I was thinking 'she better not and this chapter before that's resolved, or I'll go insane'

Thank Gods you didn't! I can't wait for your next update............. even though it's the last.......

[coley_merrin]

hehe, yes, no making insanity. I couldn't do two huge cliffhangers like that so close together. <3

And there'll be the epilogue, so one more~

Thank you~! <3

[chrysa]

spoooottt. I gotta go grocery shopping. *sigh*

[chrysa]

Hm I was thinking you were going to skip over the overly dramatic NO WE CAN'T

[coley_merrin]

At least by not skipping over it, it ended up being pretty short. XD I think if it had been another cliffhanger, there would've needed to be another chapter, lol. (Kyu's foot is magnetic, you know... it gets up there so easily)

And poor baby, stressed, too. :( He probably figures the torture is justified in some way, haha. XD

Things only bratty Kyuhyun can bring~ <3 Sigh~ <3 I'm glad the ending made up for it, though~ That Kyu was willing to give, tells a lot. Sigh. <3<3

Thank you~! <3