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Comment-A-Thon Round 4

Mar 01, 2011 20:53

Nothing special this time around, folks. Just the usual request and replying.

Authors, make a request using this format:

Prompt/Request:
Characters:
I would Like:
I Don't Want:

Writers, reply with a story.

Rules found here.

round four

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tj_teejay March 11 2011, 08:47:10 UTC

I have another request.

Prompt/Request: "Under the Radar" aftermath
Characters: Neal, Peter (may add El, Mozzie, Hughes, Jones, Diana, ... as applicable)
Would Like: A glimpse into what happens after the end of "Under the Radar" with a focus on the Neal/Peter trust issues and the fact that both Peter and Neal feel betrayed by one another. I'm not looking for a huge multi-part that continues the saga, just a glimpse into what happens next between Neal and Peter (and/or Neal's relationship to his colleagues and friends). Bonus points for angry/disappointed tear duct action on Neal's part, because is it just me or did Neal look like he was about to cry when he told Peter, "Then prove it"?
Don't Want: As stated above, a huge case!fic or arc!fic focused on continuing the saga. The trust issues to be resolved in about 10 minutes because there's an easy explanation as for why Neal's painting was in the warehouse.

For TJ - P1 ext_273467 March 23 2011, 05:09:48 UTC

(Love your work TJ so I hope this works for you ( ... )

For TJ - P2 ext_273467 March 23 2011, 05:11:40 UTC

"It's . . . it's the most beautiful things I've ever seen. These are things you hear about but you never thought you would actually see. Some, some of this was thought to be lost forever." Neal's voice held a reverence to it ( ... )

For TJ - P3 ext_273467 March 23 2011, 05:12:34 UTC

"Neal, do you realize ( ... )

For TJ - P4 ext_273467 March 23 2011, 05:13:23 UTC

Everyone was enraptured by the collection, but none quite as much as Neal. Hughes had given Peter permission that he and Neal could spend the rest of the day supervising the reclamation of the art heist. Peter was glad as he wasn't sure that he could have pulled Neal away. Nothing short of wild horses could have dragged Neal away, and he wasn't sure about that one. Neal was still sitting, glued to that spot. He'd only left to use the facilities, and when Peter and Clinton literally had to drag him with them for lunch at El's. Neal had been so distracted Peter had to firmly keep reminding him to eat while El would gently coax him while listening to his rambling descriptions. It was now dusk and getting cold. The last items were carted and being wheeled off. Neal sat for a few moments, staring off into the emptiness ( ... )

Re: For TJ - P4 tj_teejay March 23 2011, 06:34:31 UTC

Aw, thank you so much for writing this! It was a great glimpse into what could be episode 3x01, and I love that Neal made the decision of becoming a man rather than a con. Isn't that what we all want to happen eventually? Not sure that in canon it really will, though.

Re: For TJ - P4 kriadydragon March 23 2011, 20:06:09 UTC

Most excellent :D Loved that Neal told Peter about the loot, and Neal's dazed awe over all that art - very Neal. Thank you for answering the prompt.

Re: For TJ - P4 ext_273467 March 23 2011, 21:49:49 UTC

Thank you! I am so glad you like it.

Re: For TJ - P4 tj_teejay March 26 2011, 03:35:21 UTC

That was great! It makes me all, awwwww.

Re: For TJ - P4 fenchurch1 April 7 2011, 23:10:03 UTC

Oh if only this was how they would continue in season 3... sigh... I can't help seeing bad things in the future... I'll just go and read this again...:-)

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