Comment-A-Thon Round 9 - Resume Prompting!

Aug 01, 2011 13:20

And the prompts are back!

You all know the drill.

Readers, comment with a prompt using the following format:

Prompt/Request:
Characters:
I would Like:
I Don't Want:

Writers, choose a prompt and reply with a story or link to a story.

And please don't forget look over the rules, especially if you're new to the community.

round nine

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swanpride August 1 2011, 19:26:49 UTC
Prompt: Neal's Nightmare
Characters: Mainly Neal and as little Sara as possible.
I would like: Remember, when Neal mentioned that Sara complained about the bruises because he is tossing in his sleep? (and Peter's uncaring response?). I want a fic about that, either someone witnessing one of Neal's nightmares, or Peter really thinks about what Neal told him and paying more attention to his behaviour. Perhaps him being fidgy in the van ties into it? Perhaps Neal needs open spaces because of his time in prison? Perhaps he dreams of Kate's death every night?
I don't want: This is getting old but: Neal's hands getting broken, heavy torture, suizide (or cutting), and for this prompt no Crackfic.

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FILL: The Choices we Make (PG-13) lymricks August 11 2011, 20:50:00 UTC
This way to nightmares!

I fought with this fic a little, and I know I sort of deviated from some of the suggestions you made, but I hope you like it anyway!

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Re: FILL: The Choices we Make (PG-13) swanpride August 11 2011, 21:18:37 UTC
I don't mind at all. My suggestions are just that: suggestions.

That was beautiful. I especially loved the ending.

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