Comments | collegelife101: For those of you who havnt read this...

collegelife101

Sep 27, 2004 00:33

This is what i have so far with my story ( Read more... )

Comments 4

disastermaster September 26 2004, 21:56:36 UTC

seems as if bob fell for a trap

jay_hovah September 26 2004, 22:53:42 UTC

Awesome fuckin story kid.

nergan September 27 2004, 23:04:34 UTC

you are very very very talented...amazing story

agentarbys September 29 2004, 07:22:28 UTC

You use too many big words! Like "city" and "towards"!