Comments | colliding_kiss: through it all i'll be looking for better days with you

colliding_kiss

through it all i'll be looking for better days with you

Feb 22, 2010 00:13

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thuperlithp February 22 2010, 08:19:24 UTC

Erin's writing?

*gets down on one knee*

Marry me? I promise to love you forever.

Seriously though this was beautiful, so different, but just wonderful. *dies a little bit*

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:06:13 UTC

My writing says it needs time to think about this; marriage is a big commitment.

this was so unedited, too; for some reason i just couldn't read it again. :P ty bb ♥

thuperlithp February 23 2010, 00:19:44 UTC

I shall wait, for your writing is worth waiting for.

I liked it, it felt unedited, but not in a messy way. It just kind of worked with it really well.

colliding_kiss February 23 2010, 02:00:42 UTC

My writing appreciates your understanding.

Yeah. Usually I read things about a THOUSAND times before I post them; it's why I never need a beta - I'm obsessive enough myself. And this, I read, like, twice, and just couldn't. But I knew there wasn't anything that needed major fixing so I put it up. :D

flister February 22 2010, 11:05:46 UTC

I really liked this - you make some very keen observations, such as this one:

She’s not punishing you, Naomi, Katie says, in a rare moment. Look at her. She’s punishing herself. - I hadn't thought about it that way so I really liked that you said this.

I would have loved it if the episode had featured a scene like that at the end. Fingers crossed something like that will happen soon!

Ace work <3

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:09:34 UTC

I was just watching that scene and Emily -- she was just a mess, you know? It wasn't like she was just upset and trying to get back at Naomi. Emily was fucking herself over for being in love with Naomi. That's what I think, at least.

Well, in the deleted scenes on E4, there's those pictures of them hugging! That we didn't get to see! So this was my interpretation. :D thank youu!

flister February 22 2010, 15:23:21 UTC

Yes I know! I want that scene so bloody badly. Or those scenes. IDC I just want whatever they're not giving me *sulks*

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:26:49 UTC

IT'S SO UNFAIR, THAT SCENE LOOKED REALLY IMPORTANT, TOO. If it's not an unseen this week, some people are gunna be shanked.

thecon12 February 22 2010, 12:34:21 UTC

This was just lovely♥

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:10:09 UTC

aww thank you ♥

immortality February 22 2010, 13:25:08 UTC

Aw, this was just so lovely and sweet. ♥ I wish it would happen like this on the show.

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:11:35 UTC

♥ I just wish we could've seen the DELETED SCENE OF THEM HUGGING, E4 FAILLL

but tyvm bb :)

puffy_wuffy February 22 2010, 13:52:00 UTC

Katie's episode was awesome, and thanks for filling in. Gods, I wish the deleted scene was in the episode.

colliding_kiss February 22 2010, 15:12:28 UTC

I know, me too. It better be an unseen this week, or I will cut a bitch.

thank you :)