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Fic - "You Can't Always Get What You Want"

Nov 06, 2011 21:15

Title: You Can't Always Get What You Want
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Hal Stewart, Wayne "Metro Man" Scott. Megamind.
Word Count: 4,346
Rating: PG-13
Summary: On his first day out of prison, Hal followed Wayne all over the house.
Warnings: Language, smoking.
Notes: After several requests, I took the "Shadow" sentence from my last theme set ( Read more... )

fanfiction, megamind, character: hal stewart, character: metro man

Comments 16

moxyg November 8 2011, 03:10:32 UTC

I want to leave you a long and detailed comment about how beautiful this was, listing all the parts that made me grin, or giggle, or squee, or just stare at the screen with tears pricking my eyes at how perfect it is, how in-character, how gorgeous the descriptions are and how clearly it all translates in my head, so utterly real.

But I don't have the time now and I don't know when I will, so for the moment I'll have to be content with this run-on comment. >_<

Also, I am so so SOOOO happy you had time to write this, it really is beautiful. ♥ ♥ ♥

colonel_bastard November 15 2011, 00:28:10 UTC

This run-on comment is a perfectly wonderful comment! I'm so happy to hear that giggles and squees were had, and that eyes were pricked with tears. I'm especially glad that it all translates and feels real--- that's a marvelous note and I really appreciate it!

I'm really happy I had the time, too. This pairing is the best!! <333

Thanks so much for reading, Moxy, I'm glad you liked it! ^__^

yami_neko_tsuki November 16 2011, 05:06:18 UTC

That's it, I need to start sketching comments. That's what I get for thinking in movement instead of thoughts. :| Makes comments come more than a week late.

It's so easy to emphasize with both of them.

...Y'know what? Fuck words.

*purrpurr headrub*

colonel_bastard November 21 2011, 03:45:14 UTC

*purrpurrpurr*

I'm so, so happy you enjoyed it. ^____^

legendaryair November 27 2011, 00:23:42 UTC

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SO. CUTE. Thanks for posting this, Colonel, it was just the thing to cheer up a sick girl who's been in bed for a week and is OUT OF HER MIND WITH BOREDOM. Now I'm much more cheerful, thanks to the cute homey-ness of this whole setup. I kind of love these guys now, thanks to you. C: <33

colonel_bastard November 28 2011, 22:24:37 UTC

I'm so glad to hear that I was able to ease your suffering!! Hal/Wayne is the best medicine. ^__^

Thanks for reading and commenting! I hope you feel better soon. <3