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Children of Gods: Chapter Six

Mar 31, 2011 15:37

Title: Children of Gods
Authors: miabicicletta and olga_theodora
Summary: “So,” Kara whistles from where she’s slumped against the wall, elbows on her knees. “That’s Billy’s dad. Don’t see much family resemblance, do you?”
Pairings: Bill/Laura, Sam/Kara, Lee/Kara UST, Lee/?
Rating: MA (series) T+ (Chapter 6)
Wordcount: ~6000
Warnings: Non-graphic allusions to non-con and dub- ( Read more... )

Comments 22

laurakay715 April 1 2011, 10:47:12 UTC

Brilliant chapter!! Zarek is so evil. I love that Bill punched him, and I love that Billy figured out that he was his biological father. And stupid Carolanne.

Poor Bill! His whole family being ripped away from him, which was always his biggest fear, wasn't it? And poor Laura, realizing what it would do to Bill even as Zarek was telling her his evil plan...

And President William Roslin Adama?? Ker-whaaa?

Fabulous job!!!

miabicicletta April 1 2011, 17:13:39 UTC

And President William Roslin Adama?? Ker-whaaa?

You noticed! We like including these little pieces of the future to come :D You'll get some clues about what happens to various characters as time goes on :D

Zarek is the MOST evil. We love writing him. Bwhahaha.

roslin4prez April 1 2011, 18:04:21 UTC

Biillllll! Noooooooo! :'( I really want to strangle Zarek.

Future President Billy? Woot!

miabicicletta April 1 2011, 18:09:58 UTC

The survivor tally is officially: 1

Madam Prez would not be pleased (well, maybe a little pleased, given that it is Billy).

ivie392 April 1 2011, 21:35:22 UTC

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaau! this story continues to be better and better! last time I commented the flashbacks you are giving us, now I have to say THANK YOU for the details from distant future as well :)
President William Roslin Adama rulezzz :) Of course Billy will be a president - he is so smart at such a young age. Love him!!!

koolaidmom11 April 2 2011, 23:39:18 UTC

Ok, I don't know anything about the Hunger games but I love this story. I can't believe they killed Bill! Is it too much to hope that Lee, Kara and Laura all stay alive? I gather that most people must die in THG.

Well anyways, this is such fun.

captaintish April 3 2011, 05:09:06 UTC

It is a huge compliment to you that a 6,000 word chapter can somehow seem too short.

Oh dear -- is Bill dead? I don't believe it. I really don't. I have to wait to see it to believe it.

Wow, I didn't think Zarek would try to take Billy AND Zak.

Loving Gaeta. Hope he fares better in this than poor Cinna...

Loving Cottle, too. Hope we see him again soon.

Can't wait for the next chapter!