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Children of Gods: Interlude, Part One

Sep 08, 2011 20:35

Title: Children of Gods: Interlude
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bill/laura, children of gods: interlude

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lindy999 September 10 2011, 05:29:32 UTC

Oooohhh, I'm so excited for some back story :)

afrakaday September 10 2011, 19:12:08 UTC

Yay! I love this! And am so psyched to hear that there is more in the pipeline. Can't wait!! *squishes little Zak for being so darn exuberant*

captaintish September 16 2011, 01:35:00 UTC

I LOVE bb Billy, Lee and Zak. They are so much fun!

LOVING THIS. Looking forward to the next chapter!

nvgvup October 19 2011, 06:06:20 UTC

Really love that you're going back to do back-story!
Beginning to feel a bit like a need a timeline to match up all the ages/years!

I especially loved Lee's POV in this chapter. It's so HIM! The whole, wanting gravitas, realizing he's screwed because Billy already has it, and maybe being disappointed that Laura can fake it. Wonderful.

Billy really is a cool kid isn't he. Is it the hair? Is that why we all love him so much?! lol

So are we going to see how Laura starts the resistance? I can definitely see the seeds of it in her mind here!