Four-Hundred and Eighty Two Days

[coloredxcrayons]

He tugged his duffle coat tighter around himself. The high zip rubbed against his sweater, which in turn rubbed against his button up and began to irritate the already reddened peeling skin around his Adam’s apple. He ignored it. The wind had picked up. It pricked his eyes and made his lashes stick together. He thought about the possibility of

Comments

[coloredxcrayons]

Thank you for reading! It's always nice to get some feedback on a first post. :)

[lijahlover]

This was amazing and I agree with the last line.

[amyhit]

Smooth, solid writing, and some excellent details in this.

I must admit, I loathe that line from the promo. However, I really like what you did with it here. I'm not sure if you meant to write fix-it fic or not, but you have, and you've done a really good job of it.

[a_phoenixdragon]

Ohhhhhh...this was marvelous, dear!! Thank you for sharing!

*HUGS*