Comments | coloredxcrayons: Smut Sunday: Do Not Disturb Part 2/2

coloredxcrayons

Smut Sunday: Do Not Disturb Part 2/2

Feb 15, 2009 11:02

I know I know, shoot me.
This was supposed to be posted yesterday, cos it's Valentine's Day (duh), and it goes up a day late. Bad bad Kas.
I'll have you know that I went to a hockey game for five hours last night and brought my notebook with me.
But I got so into the game that the smut was forgotten amongst the throng of men in lots of padding getting ( Read more... )

merlin/arthur slash

Comments 15

eosrose February 15 2009, 20:58:33 UTC

Cupid ships them too! ^_^ Theirs really is a match made in heaven. Now they've admitted that they want each other. How long do you think it will take for them to admit that they like each other?

Great story!

coloredxcrayons February 15 2009, 21:04:57 UTC

Hmmm, I don't know. They are such stubborn boys.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Yay first comments woot!
<3

laurapetri February 15 2009, 21:04:45 UTC

LOL Thank goodness foe Cupid.Hot smex!!!

coloredxcrayons February 15 2009, 21:05:41 UTC

Glad you liked.
I haven't done smut in such a long time, I think I got a little rusty. ha ha
<3

pasty_pants February 15 2009, 21:12:38 UTC

“Arthur,” Merlin cooed as nimble fingers went to work on the laces of Arthur’s breeches, “I don’t think the spell has quite worn off yet.”

Arthur only had time to gasp before Merlin’s lips pressed against his own and his hand dipped into Arthur’s pants.

AHHH <3!!!

coloredxcrayons February 16 2009, 04:13:20 UTC

<3
Glad you liked

callistianstar February 15 2009, 23:46:33 UTC

I really like these two parts. ^^ Great job with this. I loved that Merlin was screaming for Arthur, even as Arthur left for his own bedchambers. ^^ And of course, this ending was perfect. I had wondered about Arthur's own problem...but it seems like it will be well taken care of.

coloredxcrayons February 16 2009, 04:12:58 UTC

Oh yes.
He will be well taken care of.
I think he hitches a ride in the TARDIS and becomes prince of Pendragon Porn industries
Glad you enjoyed!

ras_elased February 16 2009, 01:14:05 UTC

While I did enjoy the hot desperate sex, I was highly disturbed by the image of Gaius and Arthur HAVING TEA while Merlin was having CRAZY ORGASMS NOT TWO FEET AWAY. o_O

coloredxcrayons February 16 2009, 04:06:35 UTC

Oh yes, the Gaius.
Well I was thinking, what would Gaius do if Merlin was trapped in a magical malady of super sex?
And the first thing that came to mind was: have tea of course, after making sure he was secured so as not to molest him later in the evening.
And with Arthur thrown in, I did it just for torture.
:D