Omg i love this! You really have a great sense of humor when it comes to writing characters, that was fantastic for a short filler. I can't wait to see what else you do with these two for later. I'm still laughing from the middle fingure and the vanilla bean joke. Clever and witty XD.
X3 Thanks! I like adding the bits of humor to offset everything else, and I was determined to make a middle finger joke XD Beware of the vanilla beans! o .o;;
Lol, sorry about the Nira thing, but I thought that having Fang dating an older, mature woman would help set up a situation for Vanille and herself to hook up. Just know, I will NEVER pair them with anyone else, ever (unless I add Lightning in there cuz I think that threesome is just *drool* haha) I am glad you liked how it turned out though. ^^ Indeed you are correct, it is symbolic of a cycle ending, lol. I hope you continue to enjoy the story :) I'll try to have the next out within a few days.
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February 27 2010, 08:32:45 UTC
XD Yes, Lightning is an exception *drools too XD And yea after I calmed down, I like the fact Nira is there in the story. After all, we need to thank for for nudging Fang in the right direction ;) I'll look forward to your next chapter! =]
Twice in a row?! *squee* Happy to know you enjoyed it so much XD Flirting, yes... Fang is a mean little devil eh? Don't worry, Vanille will get her back in due time ;3
Ooo, a new fanfic reader :) welcome to our world! :D Lol Stroke of genius? O .o;;; XD Gald to know you liked it so much! Thanks for the kind words and hope you continue to enjoy the story once I get it done! :)
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At first, my mind went into overdrive when I read "her girlfriend Nira"...WHAT!!! O_O NO!!
Of course I need to keep reading and well, i've always imagined how they had first kissed and I love your scenario the best!! It's just so cute!!
And ending with them sleeping is fine, since it symbolizes a cycle (a stage in their life) coming to a close, ready to begin anew, yes? XD
Can't wait for more
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Indeed you are correct, it is symbolic of a cycle ending, lol.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story :) I'll try to have the next out within a few days.
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And yea after I calmed down, I like the fact Nira is there in the story. After all, we need to thank for for nudging Fang in the right direction ;)
I'll look forward to your next chapter! =]
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I love their flirting after their kiss,
'your tongue is really soft' lol Fang XD
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Flirting, yes... Fang is a mean little devil eh? Don't worry, Vanille will get her back in due time ;3
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I'm new to all this fan fiction stuff but you know what after reading this little stroke of genius i think i might just stick with it.
Only way i can think of describing it, MINT well done my friend.
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Stroke of genius? O .o;;; XD Gald to know you liked it so much!
Thanks for the kind words and hope you continue to enjoy the story once I get it done! :)
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I may just write one of my own.
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I totally encourage the writing of the fanfics :3 *nod nod*
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