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Entry #1

Jul 01, 2010 19:12

Title: Childhood Tales
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Kangin/Leeteuk
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2439
Color/Words: Red {lust, hostage}
Summary: In Youngwoon's eyes, girls are gorgeous bitches and guys make awesome punching bags. And somewhere along the lines comes everlasting friends.

( His mother used to tell him stories when he was young. One day you're going to meet a girl with dazzling eyes and silky hair, pink lips and a voice as sweet as a rose. )

entry #1

Comments 4

joanc20 July 2 2010, 12:43:16 UTC

KangTeuk can never get old. i love the way you wrote this fairytale like. :D

blueberrybb July 2 2010, 17:08:06 UTC

All the understated details of their close relationship, how it's friendship love and yet hints at so much more are just wonderful. The ending was <3.

catskilt July 4 2010, 10:06:25 UTC

this just made me heavy-hearted and sentimental all at the same time ♥ the way you started out fairytale-like, progressed to their friendship and then their more-than-friendship and finally ending it fairytale-like again is so pretty. i also really like how you reasoned out their dynamic, how kangin can't help himself reaching out to touch jungsu and how they're like a family by themselves already. the whole fic is beautiful :)

scovilleunit July 5 2010, 15:29:01 UTC

beautiful ♥ i loved how you characterized Kangin here, and your way of describing Leeteuk was fantastic. it's great that you're doing it canon (though it makes me miss Kangin more D:) and i think that this story is really well-written. i also love how you incorporated the whole storytelling thing, it's kinda like where the story really revolves around. (: great job!