Unravelling (for mcr_100)

[colour_surround]

Ray/Bob (implied)
Drabble
PG
written May 2008.
Notes: For mcr_100 challenge 32, Chicago. Second place.

Comments

[rayla_]

CONGRATULATIONS!

[foolish_somnium]

<333
Congratulating too,this is great!

[iwalkalone84]

Awwwwwwwwwwww (stupid grin included).

So sweet, but also really sad for such a short piece. Or maybe it's just my mood. Beautiful, though. <3

[madelinesimone]

That's pretty awesome. I could see Ray falling apart slowly like that, like it might even take over before he's fully aware of it.
Congrats!

[janes_heirloom]

I loved this! (As I seem to always love what you write)
I think the idea of the world straining and cracking a little instead of crashing down is so much more realistic (well, that's the way I've seemed to experience it).
&well done on 2nd place