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razzlie April 19 2010, 07:05:01 UTC
3 chapters left? wha? D8 but there's so much we dont know yet ;A; man you sure are good at keeping things dramatic ;3

and LOL Matty as Mrs. White ;D ♥

great chap as always mah bear :D and I look forward to the next one

AND VASH *A* OMFG YUS ♥ if there was only some Austria in it ;3

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colourbine April 20 2010, 01:51:26 UTC
I know, amirite ;) I try to keep things interesting

OF COURSE. I COULDN"T RESIST. I had to make a crack at it xD &hearts

:) thanks, mah cat. You are too sweet.

YUS VASH. Well, its almost ending but I'll try to see if I can squeeze in Austria in there somewhere. ;D Just for you, mah cat

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razzlie April 20 2010, 05:50:52 UTC
did a good job of it ;D ♥

LOL YUS >:D

always foo :D that's mah job 8D

VASH *A* ♥ LOL YUS. even if its just him saying "Vash doesn't tell me things o;"

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colourbine April 21 2010, 01:46:16 UTC
so sweet, cat &hearts

;D LOLOL of course. I have to include it now....somehow. 83 That's too awesome an opportunity to pass. >w

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serebronaga April 19 2010, 09:23:21 UTC
Yeah, I caught that lovely Russia/America subtext. It's my icons isn't it. Don't let them lead you astray!

Only three chapters! Whaaaat, that's crazy!

Only Alfred would attempt to solve a murder mystery with a board game. A totally awesome board game!

And of course there's interest! As long as you have a story to tell, I for one will always listen :D

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colourbine April 20 2010, 01:49:40 UTC
xD Well, I always intended for there to be some Russia/America hintings but the icons are certainly helping me move astray damn those sexy icons and appropriate icon is appropriate. -nods-

xD I know. It might be four if the next one ends up being too long or five if I decided to an epilogue.

I know, huh! Clue is awesome BD All boardgames should bow down to its awesomeness. xD

awww that's too sweet, Vit. ;A; Thanks so much

And thanks for commenting :)

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sppandaaa April 19 2010, 18:29:33 UTC
I'm interested to see how you're gonna squeeze all the unknown information into 3 chapters. Oh man. XDDDDD

Alfred trying to solve the murder mystery with Clue was priceless. It was very... American to say the least.

And I am always up for another go round with this series. I would totally read the next installment to this series if you made one.

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colourbine April 20 2010, 01:46:03 UTC
it's going to be tough but I think I'll manage ;)

xD yeah well, I was kind of set on making a Clue reference and Alfred using it to try to solve the mystery just seemed like an Alfred thing to do.

Oh thank you :) I'm glad that you're interested.

Thank you for commenting, dear :)

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takiphevoli April 20 2010, 03:55:31 UTC
Only three more chapters? Really? Ahh now I'm all curious as to how you're going to wrap this all up...

I shouldn't have been so amused at the inclusion of Clue. But I was. X) Oh Al, so American. (And I didn't know they had different names in different versions...huh. Learn something new everyday ^^) Also, yay for Lily and Vash! :D They are such adorable siblings :3

Um, I have yet another question...are Arthur and Seychelles still invisible and a puppet respectively? It's kind of a pointless thing to ask, but...yeah. I seem to ask a lot of questions orz. But the Arthur/Seychelles moment was rather sweet ^^ I feel so sorry for her, falling for a guy who's already taken (and by another guy, no less ;P).

I'm all for reading another sequel to this, big sis! ^^ These sort of fantastical murder mysteries are always fun to read o/

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colourbine April 20 2010, 04:56:50 UTC
Well, its going to be a heck of three chapters, that's for sure. ^^ I might split one chapter into two if it ends up getting too long though.

;D I am glad you were amused by it. You weren't the only one. ;) Alfred would totally use Clue to try to solve his problems (uh, yeah, I should probably stop looking stuff that I'm interested in in Wiki ) I know! They're too cute 83 I should include more of the Hetalia gang in there.

Arthur and Seychelles are still invisible and puppet respectively. It's not a stupid question. ^^ There are no stupid questions only stupid people ;) It was. I just keep adding on to the heartbreak don't I? ( and she can watch the hawt guy on guy action HUR BD I know, huh. I am far too cruel to poor Seychelles)

Thanks, little sis :D so sweet

Thanks for commenting :)

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takiphevoli April 20 2010, 05:34:14 UTC
Definitely, considering how many things still need to be tied up in this ^^ (and is it wrong that I'm kind of hoping it'll end up being four chapters just so I have something to look forward to to read? orz)

He totally would. He's just resourceful like that ;) (Ah, that explains it. Wiki does that to people.) You should! It's so much fun seeing random cameos from different characters in stories ^^

Alright, I was just checking. ^^ It was just I was reading the scene going all "awww how sweet poor Seychelles WAIT isn't Artie invisible??" So yeah. Poor, poor Seychelles ;; I kind of want to give her a hug now *is a softy for one-sided relationships*

Welcome big sis ^^

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colourbine April 21 2010, 00:46:33 UTC
I think I'll be able to manage. ;D If not, I always have the options of splitting chapters (awww that's sweet. Although more chapters = longer wait for ending)

;) of course, Al is just intelligent like that. He's the full embodiment of what an American should be. (It does. I pratically wiki everything) xD I'll try but I doubt I'll get any other characters in since its just going to be full-out rising action and CLIMAX.

<.< yeah, he is >.> -shoves inconsistency under carpet- <.< Give her a hug then, she deserves it. -3- -doesn't take blame for causing the one-sided relationship-

;) &hearts

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razzlie April 20 2010, 07:18:56 UTC
THIS IS A COMMENT ♥
AWESOME AS ALWAYS MAH BEAR ♥ 8D

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colourbine April 20 2010, 07:22:53 UTC
;-; so sweet mah cat ;-; &hearts

'None of them could ever love you the way I do...
And as the years go by, our friendship will never die
you're going to see, its our destiny"

&hearts >O< LUBBLES CHU MAH CAT

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razzlie April 20 2010, 07:26:51 UTC
always foo ;D -spins&sparkles- kachika kachika ;D

;A: I LOVE THAT SONG ♥

LEAN ON ME
WHEN YOUR NOT STRONG
AND I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND
I"ll HELP YOU CARRY ON
THE HEAVY LOAD
FOR IT WONT BE LONG
'til IM GUNNA NEED SOMEBODY
TO LEAN ON

>O< ♥
LUFFLES CHUS MAH BEAR

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colourbine April 21 2010, 01:44:01 UTC
;) so cute 83

SO SWEET &hearts

"WHEN SOMEBODY LOVES YOU
EVERYTHING IS BEAUTIFUL"

>O< LUFFLES CHU MAH CAT &hearts

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