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A Touchy Subject

Apr 21, 2008 03:28

Title: A Touchy Subject
Author: veradee
Prompts: 11 p.m., cashmere
Genre: pre-smut
Rating: PG-13
Warning: none
Word Count: 3,121
Summary: Severus Snape learns how (un-)pleasant it can be to deviate from one's usual way of dressing.

( A Touchy Subject )

Comments 8

unruhe_ April 21 2008, 07:19:16 UTC

I'm so glad I checked my flist before going to bed :)

This was hot, without being explicit. Really good!

veradee April 21 2008, 10:20:43 UTC

Thank you very much. I hope you slept well afterwards. :)

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veradee April 21 2008, 22:44:15 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

zephyrosity April 22 2008, 02:47:57 UTC

Hee! I liked it very much.
The more I read, the more I was convinced that Snape's sweater had been enchanted. Especially after the part were Snape mentions that it had been a gift from his mother. What mother could resist such a scheme. I really didn't know for sure till the very end(when Snape takes the sweater off and Tonks is still attracted to him) if it was Snape's newly established hotness or a charm that was making the ladies so excited. That was a fun twist.

I really liked how you kept escalating Snap's situation and the women's behavior throughout. Minerva was soo funny, but my favorite part of the whole story was this:
"Everyone at Grimmauld Place was asleep. Almost everyone. Because while Molly tried to pretend that Arthur's scratchy chest hair was Snape's soft jumper, as she kissed along her husband's upper body, the only female Order member who hadn't touched that jumper so far was about to do so now."

Hee, I always knew Molly was a tigress! Go Molly!

veradee April 22 2008, 11:35:40 UTC

Thank you.

The thought that the jumper might be enchanted never entered my head, although it probably should have, seeing that we're talking about witches and wizards here. I'm very glad that you pointed it out, though. It's nice to know that a reader might see more in the fic than I thought. :)

Well, Molly. Looks like she isn't satisfied by Arthur alone, doesn't it. ;)

maggie_friday April 23 2008, 18:12:05 UTC

This weekend I watched "Truly, Madly, Deeply", a fabulous movie in which Alan Rickman wears what looks like a black cashmere jumper. This visual cue figured heavily in my imagination when I read your story!

Here's hoping that Snape will continue to dress for success!

veradee April 25 2008, 12:05:13 UTC

It's too along ago that I watched Truly Madly Deeply. I seems that I will have to watch it again and look out for nice jumpers.

He might do so, but I suppose in the future he will think twice for which occasion he wears which clothes. ;)

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veradee April 26 2008, 13:43:50 UTC

Thanks. :)

Well, but Alan Rickman doesn't even need such a jacket, does he? ;)