Comments | comeon_eileen: Fic: But Not Today // Star Trek: Voyager

comeon_eileen

Fic: But Not Today // Star Trek: Voyager

Oct 10, 2009 12:02

I am in my second season of the Voyager marathon, and although I'm supposed to be closer to the beginning of that season, I cheated and watched Resolutions first. Can you blame me? Anyways, this is just a short piece taking place after the end of that episode. It's been a while since I've written actual Star Trek Fic (and pretty much forever, since ( Read more... )

voyager, fic, tv

Comments 9

cold_queen_5 October 11 2009, 02:03:21 UTC

You are such a Jakotay shipper.

comeon_eileen October 11 2009, 15:41:23 UTC

lol although i would not call it jakotay. JetCer is so much of a nicer term.

cold_queen_5 October 11 2009, 15:43:24 UTC

How are you gonna ABANDON ME on YIM...then comment-y here?

Also, how do you PRONOUNCE "JetCer"...also, what the hell is that a shortened version of? I'm not seeing it. I do see "etc." in there...

comeon_eileen October 11 2009, 15:48:56 UTC

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comeon_eileen October 11 2009, 15:42:21 UTC

Why I am glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!

hecate_12 October 11 2009, 10:18:27 UTC

Aw, that was so lovely! I loved the line switching at the end!

comeon_eileen October 11 2009, 15:44:01 UTC

Yay, I'm glad you liked it. That brief exchange on the planet was kind of what fueled this fic. I was like, how ironic. :P thanks!

kosmickway October 11 2009, 20:40:48 UTC

Nice work. The dialogue is refreshing-- a nice change from some of the WAY stilted work that sometimes comes with post-Resolutions fic. This is very nicely unstilted. And way to pull out the nuance of the lines in the last three sentences. I'd never have even thought to flip those lines and make them work-- but they do.

Posting more here, yes?

comeon_eileen October 20 2009, 22:58:08 UTC

Holy late responses, Batman. This took a while for me to respond!

Anyways. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know what you mean about some post-resolutions work - and happy to be perceived on the good side of that line. :P

I certainly hope to write more! I just need the muses to oblige. But it's great seeing other Janeway/Chakotay fans.

Thanks again!