Addison Montages: Phantom Rings

[comfyabyss]

Her phone rings.

For some reason she is in a pair of grey sweats, a ratty Yankees tee too. She is curled up on the cold wooden floor. Her suitcase in front of her, a dark green abyss of clothing, piled up high. She runs her fingers through her hair, and then swipes them by her eye; pulling down wet tears and mascara on the way.

Comments

[lozzy]

I liked this!! It was kinda sad, but well written.

[freiheitfuehlen]

Wow, beautifully written. I really like it.

[still_might_be]

Clicked on your icon, and... wow. Brief, but beautiful. Your prose is lovely, and your character psychology is spot-on. Loved the "rings" conceit; impressed by how you deliver your point with such economy.

~CL/GG