Eternal Sunshine - Chapter 1

[comiskey]

Canst thou forget that sad, that solemn day,
When victims at yon altar's foot we lay?
Canst thou forget what tears that moment fell,
When, warm in youth, I bade the world farewell?

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Claire heard the ringing of the telephone before she opened her eyes.  She blinked slowly and turned in the direction of the irritating sound.  The dream

Comments

[britnik2]

Some nice writing here. Looks very promising. Cant wait for the next part :D

[comiskey]

Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you're looking forward to the next part. It should be up in a couple of days :)

[atlantis2_04]

more more more!!!!!!!!!
stop thinking claire!!!!! just call peter!!!!! :D :D :D

eternal sunshine is for the jim carrey movie?

[comiskey]

more more more!!!!!!!!!

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so much. And don't worry, Claire will get in contact with Peter next chapter :)

The title is connected to the Jim Carrey movie and the poem that the movie's title came from. The poem is "Eloisa to Abelard" by Alexander Pope.

[atlantis2_04]

oh thanks for the explanation, i cant wait for next chapter!!!

[comiskey]

You're welcome :) And I've just posted the next chapter!

[comiskey]

I'll be posting more in a couple of days. Glad you're liking it so far!

[littleone87]

This is wonderful, I love it! Can't wait to read more. :)

[comiskey]

Thanks so much for the comment and I'm really happy that you love it so far! :)

[dragonydreams]

This is a very intriguing start. I'm dying to know what happened!

[comiskey]

I'm glad the first chapter has piqued your interest and that you're dying to find out what happened. That's what I was going for ;) Thanks a lot for the comment and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as the mystery is unraveled.