Eternal Sunshine - Chapter 2

[comiskey]

Claire sat on top of her comforter with her knees drawn up to her chest trying to think of a plan. A plan would give her structure and structure would make her feel less adrift. She should probably take a shower, but didn’t want to move yet. The phone rang again, but she didn’t reach for it. She didn’t feel like talking to anyone until she felt

Comments

[elriel_dono]

Now i'm hooked.
You haave to update@

[obisgirl]

This is really good. Please continue. I'm intruiged.

[comiskey]

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're liking it so far and are intrigued by the storyline.

[comiskey]

Thanks a lot! I'm glad you're hooked :) And don't worry, I should be able to update in a few days.

[littleone87]

Ahhh! What happened to Claire? Did the Haitian erase her memory? Hmmm...

And this was cute!

“It’s Peter. The movie’s sold out, so I hope it’s fine if we just rent something and order Chinese. I’ll be back from work at six so you can come over any time after that.”

I love Peter. SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! Sorry I just get excited when you update!

[comiskey]

Ahhh! What happened to Claire? Did the Haitian erase her memory? Hmmm...

You'll just have to keep reading to find out! ;)

Thanks for telling me that you thought Peter's message was cute. I always like knowing what works. And Peter is just adorable, isn't he?

I'm really happy that you're excited about my updates. Thanks a lot for commenting!

[wanttotransform]

I am completely and hopelessly addicted.
You just write so fantastically, I feel so sympathetic for Claire - what happened to her?!

[comiskey]

I really appreciate your comment and thanks for the compliments. It's really flattering to know that you're addicted to the story and love my writing style. As for Claire, I feel sympathetic for her too (poor girl is going through a really tough time), but unfortunately I can't tell you what happened to her yet! That would ruin the mystery ;)

[atlantis2_04]

oh yes! finally!!! well next chapter right??? right??? :D :D :D

[comiskey]

Glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chapter and will hopefully get it up in the next few days :)

[dragonydreams]

That's very scary, hearing voicemails of people increasingly concerned and commenting on things you don't know about. Hopefully Peter will be able to fill in some blanks.

[comiskey]

Thanks a lot for the comment! The voicemails were definitely very scary for Claire. Peter's going to show up to help Claire in the next chapter and as for filling in the blanks...well, you'll just have to read and find out. ;)

Thanks for reading and giving me feedback. The next chapter should be up in a couple of days!