Eternal Sunshine - Chapter 3

[comiskey]

Title: Eternal Sunshine (3/12)
Fandom: Heroes
Word Count: 1,200 this chapter (~3,300 so far)
Characters/Pairing: Peter/Claire, ensemble
Rating: R
Warnings: incest, sexual situations, angst
Spoilers: through S2E11

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Summary: Claire Bennet wakes up one morning with with no memory of the day before. Terrified by the thoughts of what

Comments

[littleone87]

Yay! You updated! I was going through withdrawals...hehe. ;) I loved it! Peter is SUCH a sweetheart and I love how you portray him as such. I love how they talk with their minds. It's so intimate and lovely!

So...What in the world happened to Claire? Hmmm....

Please update again soon! :)

[comiskey]

Withdrawals - oh no! I'm glad that you were so excited about the update and thanks a lot for the feedback. Peter is definitely a sweetheart and I'm glad you love the way I portray him. The talking with their minds part (which is definitely a very intimate thing) was a fun part to write, so I'm happy you liked it.

As for what happened to Claire...don't worry, the mystery will be solved, but there are going to be a few more twists and turns left first!

[ladycat713]

This should one heck of an interesting mystery.

[obisgirl]

I hope Zach can fill in the gaps for Claire.

[comiskey]

Hmm... *tries to think of something to say that won't spoil the next part of the story too much* Zach definitely has some information, but whether that information will help Claire will have to remain a secret for now :)

Thanks for the comment!

[obisgirl]

I expected that. Lol. 'Cause you can't have a story with only two chapters. Lol.

[wanttotransform]

He wanted to save her, this girl who was no longer a cheerleader. She was his friend, his niece, and once upon a time she’d been his destiny. He couldn’t deny her anything.
No Peter! She is still your destiny! Lol!
I adore Peter in this fic, he's just awesomely adorable and Claire is just so broken it's compelling!

[comiskey]

No Peter! She is still your destiny!

Haha, so very true! He just hasn't realized it yet. I'm happy that you like the way I'm writing both Peter and Claire in this fic. Thanks so much for the feedback!

[sugarcoating]

Ooh! I love the suspense. I'm glad you update frequently and ZACH! I miss him.

Wonderful.

[comiskey]

I miss Zach too, so I'm really excited to have him in the story. I'm glad you're excited that he's going to play a part too! It makes me happy that the suspense is working for you because writing a mystery is pretty new for me and it's a lot of fun so far. I'll try to continue updating regularly. Thanks for appreciating that. And thanks, of course, for your comments. I'm happy you're enjoying the story. :)

[dragonydreams]

Peter was very good with her. He always is.

[comiskey]

Yes, he is always good with her. I'm glad you liked the way he handled things. Thanks for commenting :)