Eternal Sunshine - Chapter 4

[comiskey]

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Summary: Claire Bennet wakes up one morning with with no memory of the day before. Terrified by the thoughts of what might have happened to her during those missing hours, she and Peter embark on a journey to discover the truth.

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Comments

[wanttotransform]

Aww. They held hands lol.
I really hope Zach can help! It was awesome, I love that Peter took the pain for her - my heart melted!
This fic is amazing!

[obisgirl]

I loved how they held hands, and Claire noted how natural it felt.

[comiskey]

Thanks for the comment and I'm glad that you loved the holding hands moment. :)

[comiskey]

Thanks for the comment! I'm really glad that you love the fic and it's great hearing which parts of the chapter you enjoyed. :)

[dragonydreams]

I liked how natural it was for them to be holding hands. Very sweet. Loved Zach's reaction to seeing Claire. Can't wait for the next chapter.

[comiskey]

I'm glad that you liked the naturalness of them holding hands and Zach's reaction to seeing Claire. Thanks for the comment!

[sugarcoating]

Aww, I love Peter in this story. I just wanna hug him. I did feel bad when Claire cried on Zach's shoulder but that makes sense.

I'm dying to know what happened - great story!
x

[comiskey]

I want to hug Peter too, he sure deserves it in this story! Poor Claire's on an emotional rollercoaster and Zach is a touchstone of normality for her. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for the comments!

[littleone87]

Oh, I love everything about this! Peter is such a sweetheart towards Claire. I love how they held hands, how he protected her from feeling anything when they teleported, and how he helped her when she couldn't talk to Zach! *sigh* I'm very excited for more! Have a good time out of town, we'll be patiently waiting here for your next chapter. :P

[comiskey]

Thanks so much! Peter is a complete sweetheart towards Claire (which will make things interesting in the later chapters...) I'm glad you're excited for more, and I'm back now, so hopefully you won't have to wait too much longer for the next chapter :)

[atlantis2_04]

i love this chapter that holding hands was so sweet!!!!
peter is so lovely, well peter "is" a sweetheart...;) at least in s1.

I hope you have a great week and update soon after that!! :D

[comiskey]

Thanks! Peter definitely is a sweetheart. (I think I sort of hope/assume that he will return to more of S1 Peter in the future). I'm back, so hopefully I'll be able to update with the next chapter soon :)