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At around 7:47 pm December 3, 2004, two stops in on a ride back to Santa Cruz from Watsonville, a man boards the bus with a Rock Star in his hand. He insists on playing The Animal Game with us. (Rules of The Animal Game: Name an animal. Any animal.) Among the three of us, animals named include cat, dog, horse, lion, and giraffe. Between him and his

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[slimynolegs]

AINSLIE. What rules do you get to break when you're 19? I'm glad you're preparing for the future! 7th and 9th are my favorites. Those are all so very much like short stories, minus everything but the climax! Half-naked man, huh? ;).

[dicedpear]

"The TA waves goodbye as I exit. She is nice. I like her. Sarah likes her. The TA likes Jessie. Sofia is outside. I don't have to battle the rapist deer alone."

Ms. Ngo- your phrases are concise and poignant. your words leap from the page. your characters are lovable and sad. congratulations. please write a sequel.
The board of directors

hair and seducation.

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<3 !!

[verycrumbystuff]

where is watsonville?

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