ummm I can't really explain, there was some deviation somewhere, heh I hope it's ok...“Jensen. Sweetie. Stop fidgeting!” are the words that leave Danneel’s mouth as they approach the door, said with the utmost affection as she delivers a smack to the back of his head. The guy just cannot stop tugging at his shirt, or fussing with his hair
( ... )
“Who brought them?” Jensen asks with an arched brow.
“Hey I made them, you just did the carrying, so there,” and she sticks her tongue out at him, swiping the tub from him to set down on the kitchen counter, and Jensen holds out the gift to Jared, “So where’s the cake?”
“In the dining room. I just finished with the frosting so-”
“Wait, you made the cake? You can bake?” Danneel asks as Jared takes the present from Jensen into the other room.
Jared calling out over his shoulder, “Yeah, it’s kind of a hobby of mine.”
Danneel slaps Jensen across the chest, mouthing, “He bakes,” before Jared re-enters the room.
“So how long have you two been together?” Jared asks in what could maybe pass as casual to the untrained eye, but there was no missing that twinge of sadness.
“How long have-...” she looks over at Jensen and then back to Jared, “me and him?” and then she bursts out laughing
( ... )
Aww, this was sooooo cute. Again, I am so amazed at how you get everything packed into such a short expanse of words. Jensen's and Danneel's awesome friendship for one, Jensen's nervousness at the front door for another.
And then there's this:
“I don’t know. Jensen seems pretty cool to me.”
“I do? I mean uh, thanks,” Jensen ducks his head down, though he can’t keep the smile from his face, or the flush of pink from his cheeks, raising his head slowly, he swallows hard when his eyes meet Jared’s who’s right there in front of him all of a sudden. His lips part in a gasp as Jared pulls him in close, capturing his lip between his own. Jared slips his tongue into Jensen’s mouth, who sucks it gently before pushing back with his.
I loved that Jared moved fast, took what he wanted. Mmm-hmm! That was lovely.
*is all smiley now* awww thank you so much hon, I'm really glad their friendship shone through, it was so much fun for me to write them, aside from Jared, obviously, Danneel is my favourite person to have as Jensen's BFF *nods* and haha yup once Jared knew that he could have him he was all for the taking, and apparently when it comes to Jensen and Jared I totally believe in love at first sight lol they do bring out the schmoopyness ♥
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“Hey I made them, you just did the carrying, so there,” and she sticks her tongue out at him, swiping the tub from him to set down on the kitchen counter, and Jensen holds out the gift to Jared, “So where’s the cake?”
“In the dining room. I just finished with the frosting so-”
“Wait, you made the cake? You can bake?” Danneel asks as Jared takes the present from Jensen into the other room.
Jared calling out over his shoulder, “Yeah, it’s kind of a hobby of mine.”
Danneel slaps Jensen across the chest, mouthing, “He bakes,” before Jared re-enters the room.
“So how long have you two been together?” Jared asks in what could maybe pass as casual to the untrained eye, but there was no missing that twinge of sadness.
“How long have-...” she looks over at Jensen and then back to Jared, “me and him?” and then she bursts out laughing ( ... )
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I'm with Danneel too!
Thank you so much, it was exactly what I wanted.
D xxx
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And then there's this:
“I don’t know. Jensen seems pretty cool to me.”
“I do? I mean uh, thanks,” Jensen ducks his head down, though he can’t keep the smile from his face, or the flush of pink from his cheeks, raising his head slowly, he swallows hard when his eyes meet Jared’s who’s right there in front of him all of a sudden. His lips part in a gasp as Jared pulls him in close, capturing his lip between his own. Jared slips his tongue into Jensen’s mouth, who sucks it gently before pushing back with his.
I loved that Jared moved fast, took what he wanted. Mmm-hmm! That was lovely.
Awesome, as always! <3
xoxo
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