Morning y'all - once again I'm still your guest host for the week,
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Pull out your hyphens, colons, semi-colons, and every other grammatical cheat code you have and prepare to abuse the heck out of them because today is three sentence fic day. Prompts can be whatever your heart desires, but the
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“Oh, come on, Naomi, she’s in third grade, not kindergarten - and besides, you can’t spare a few minutes to do your daughter’s hair?”
“All right, Dan, you try braiding her hair in the morning - because I guarantee you there is no way she can get that done in fifteen minutes - in between waking Rachel up before 8:30, getting Jordan ready for preschool and freaking out about your 9 o’clock briefing.”
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"But Daddy, it hurts when you pull it," protested Rachel, squirming under his grip with all the energy of a small hurricane.
Dan gave up, grabbing the glittery red barrettes from the side table and handing them mutely to his daughter, who stared at him reproachfully; he tried not to imagine Naomi's reaction.
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LOVE IT. Thank you so much for going back and doing this :D I can totally *picture* this in my head - especially mini-Rach disappointed pout lol.
*post-series Dan + Rachel heartbreak*
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OMG so much delicious not angsty fluffy normality! ♥ (Don't see that nearly enough with these two IMO.)
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But you're totally right about there needing to be more fic!
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Also, hell to the yes about the lack of R+C fic in fandom. It always bugs me how the extent of these two in canon was "bonding over shopping and being total opposites". I mean, really, KA?
None of the others' friendships were explored very extensively, not even J+M... but I can forgive them for that, considering it'd be hard to D&M in the middle of a mission. And, well, kids and publishers wanted to keep the focus on the Animorphs fighting Yeerks, so explorations of friendship took a back seat.
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I know! Marco and Jake at least got some fun banter and occasional emotional support. Rachel and Cassie is just like, "Here, Cassie, wear this." "But!" "Jake." "Okay."
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Best summation ever.
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