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Thursday: Deus ex Machina

Aug 23, 2012 16:17

"god out of the machine"

An unforeseen character/event/ability/whatever solves the seemingly unsolvable problem. Frustrating on television, but entertaining in comment fic.

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3 prompts to a fandom
no more than 5 prompts in a row
no spoilers in the prompts
if the fill contains spoilers, warn for them and leave space

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with_rainfall August 24 2012, 10:17:47 UTC

Supernatural/Animorphs, Winchesters, one of the brothers is kidnapped by the Skrit Na just as they're close to being defeated.

fill 1/2 rattyjol August 24 2012, 21:29:46 UTC

(( Timeline shifts! Yay! Loren's canon age for TAC and Sam is canon age for the show. ))

The first thing Sam noticed as he drifted back towards consciousness was that his head ached. The second thing he noticed was that he couldn't move.

His eyes snapped open. He was bound hand and foot, thick ropes pinning his arms to his sides and around his ankles. A blonde girl, maybe thirteen or fourteen, lay on her side nearby, also tied up.

"Hey kid," he said, keeping his voice low. "You okay?"

"Better than you are, mister." She looked pointedly at his forehead, where they must have hit him to knock him out -- whoever they were ( ... )

fill 2/2 rattyjol August 24 2012, 21:30:11 UTC

The archway was so short that even Loren had to stoop a little to get through. The hallway was a little taller but still short-ceilinged, and Sam had to duck his head to avoid hitting it ( ... )

Re: fill 2/2 with_rainfall August 26 2012, 09:07:28 UTC

Aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh Sam and Loren. Both badass, both in the same room. And then they meet Elfangor.
*flail*

I like Sam using his 'civilian voice' on Loren, and the way she just jumps up and is her awesome, heroic, totally fearless self. :DDDD Thank you!

Re: fill 2/2 rattyjol August 26 2012, 09:25:21 UTC

Well I figured if Loren could get to that point on her own with Chapman still unconscious like in canon then she didn't really need Sam's help all that much. :D I miiiight rewrite other bits of TAC with Sam, but I probably won't get to it.

Re: fill 2/2 with_rainfall August 26 2012, 14:06:05 UTC

True. :)
Yeah, of course RL > fic and fandom.

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