SPN Fic

Jan 03, 2009 13:13

Title: Conversations with Angels (5/5)
Author: Commodoresexual
Disclaimer: I do not own Dean, Sam, Castiel, Ruby, or Uriel. Or any other heavenly creatures, sad to say.
Rating: PG-13 for language and dirty, dirty porn!thoughts. No porn. (yeeeet)
Genre/Pairing: Dean, Sam, Castiel, Ruby, Uriel, and OMAC. Dean/Castiel, Sam/Ruby hinted.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

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kalikahuntress January 3 2009, 20:02:13 UTC
On hun, this is a freakin' winner, gah, your Ruby rocks. This, this is what I see and what the show needs seriously. Ruby snarky and fighting back in her own way, doing all the human things that people do but doing good not because she feels pleasure from it, or even wants gratitude, she's got a plan and she wants Sam to be the winner, the chosen one when shit goes down and I am so amazed that you've put it all out there with the sharp dialogue I come to expect from the Ruby I need to see on the show but I am not quite getting. And Castiel is glorious in this, calm yet brimming with anger without resorting to anything like profanity or raising his voice ( ... )

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commodoresexual January 4 2009, 16:42:09 UTC
You know, when I write, I seriously try and put the boys in of the million scenes I see them in-between hunting down the bad guys. I like taking the quiet moments and stretching them out. I guess it's coming across well, and I'm glad for it.

As for Ruby - I am trying SO hard to be fair and yet honest with where I think her character is going. A demon in love should be something completely different than an angel in love. Ruby in love particularily is NOT going to be pretty sunshine and rainbows, and I'll be going into that, later.

Also, dude, like I could resist the meta!jab of Jessica and Alexis? Nevah! Hee.

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big_heart_june January 3 2009, 21:02:08 UTC
Here be my quote-y review! :P XDDDDDD
GAH! Ruby & Castiel!! AWESOME writing, ABSOLUTE PERFECTION. The dialogue was SO GOOD and Castiel was freaking brilliant! Man, how I love him!

He paused momentarily at Ruby's table, trying not to breath in the smell of sulfur and sin, before he sat himself down, and looked down at his fingers as he steepled them together. Only then did he lift his gaze, dark blue eyes narrowing on the woman's borrowed face, and he spoke without intonation. “Demon.”

PERFECT!!!!!!! As was THIS part! GUH! Fierce!Commanding!Castiel! *faints*

“I will end you, demon. I will rend you limb from limb in your mortal form. I will hunt down your demonic one and break it down to mere atoms, to be spread like dust across the sky. I will make you feel every inch of it, when I slowly destroy you. I will do all this, before I let you take Sam. Before I let you break Dean's heart, in such a way.” He put his hands flat on the table, not caring if anyone saw him, as he flared his Grace towards her, his voice low and flat. “You will ( ... )

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commodoresexual January 4 2009, 16:47:38 UTC
I .... frigging love your quotey-reviews. Mostly because you always pick out my favorite parts in writing. Hee.

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ladyyueh January 4 2009, 05:25:26 UTC
Castiel and Ruby showdown? Awesome.

Suddenly he could feel Dean's hands on his borrowed skin, touching far more than the vessel. Touching what made Castiel - well - Castiel.

This. Yes! Because while the vessel is hot, I have been craving something more, beyond that, truly Castiel in all his glory because in essence he's an angel. So awesome when it's Castiel that attracts Dean and not the vessel. (What? It's my kink.)

And. Oh, boys. Christmas letters? So heartbreaking and heartwarming at once.

They're all so perfectly in character.

Such a wonderful Sam and Dean without all the angst so many other fics have.

*explodes with glee*

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commodoresexual January 4 2009, 16:53:12 UTC
HEE. Thank you! Funnily enough? A Castiel vs Ruby showdown is the WHOLE reason I started writing this series. And man, did it work out!

And I'm with you - because while the vessel is hot - I want to believe that what attracts Dean is Castiel, pure and simple. Hence why it's not 'gay' (except when it totally is.) Angelofthelordsexual, ahem.

Oh, it'll get dark - because this is SPN and I can't avoid that. But SPN is about, and always will be, about how Sam and Dean love each other enough to stand with each other at the end of the world, no matter what else has happened. Because they are SamandDean.

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waterrun January 14 2009, 21:06:28 UTC
recently got turned onto the deancastiel fanfic been enjoying many of them but some just stand out from the rest--your's is definitely in that category. love long stories and ones with great dialogue. your lines jump off the page-you've captured the characters' voices so well. the scene when dean somersaults off the bed after getting caught checking out cas's ass was priceless and one you could definitely see jensen doing. could there be more-please- especially now that you've brought dean and cas to beyond the conversation stage how amount "intercourse with angels" thanks so much for your wonderful story loved it alot

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mulder200 October 29 2009, 03:08:04 UTC
You're lying!” Ruby hissed in his direction, and Castiel cannot help but see the creature beneath the skin then, black and ugly, but still... strangely human in her disbelief. He put down the sugar container, just arching an eyebrow at her, and she heaved out a breath, anger replaced with shock. “...But angels … can't lie. Fuck me, Dean bagged another angel?”

Castiel frowned - because for one the word 'bagged' had too many connotations, and secondly because well, that wasn't necessarily true. Yet. He felt something low throb in his stomach and relished the feeling as he spoke. “That is inaccurate.”

“That is inaccurate … wait. So he hasn't. So you're lying.” She scoweled in confusion. “Angels can't lie!”

“We cannot.” He sipped his coffee, wondering which he was enjoying more - Ruby's expression or the thought of Dean 'bagging' him, like Dean did Anna. After a moment of contemplation he decided the 'bagging' option.

LOL! I just love this! Go Cas!

“Yes. Me.” He folded his hands around his cup, letting the words flow out of him ( ... )

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