Comments | commodoresexual: Conclusion to 'How Dean, Sam and Johnny Spent Their Christmas Vacation'

commodoresexual

Conclusion to 'How Dean, Sam and Johnny Spent Their Christmas Vacation'

Jul 07, 2009 19:29

Title: How Dean, Sam and Johnny Spent Their Christmas Vacation (2/2)
Author: Commodoresexual
Disclaimer: Spoilers through 4.11. I don't own Supernatural, Dean, Sam, Castiel, or Castiel's possible vessel.
Rating: PG-13, warnings for violence, hate crimes
Genre/Pairing: Dean/Castiel, Sam, Castiel's (AU) Vessel
Warnings: As per usual, my view on ( Read more... )

fanfic, supernatural

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commodoresexual July 8 2009, 03:27:30 UTC

I hope it's good? *crossing fingers*

anonymous July 10 2009, 00:53:24 UTC

The thing I admire about your writing. Something I try to take into practice in my own writing, that you have seemed to just master - is your attention to detail. The small quirks of a person make the most telling details and character insights. You have a way about you that really captures a character in few words ( ... )

commodoresexual July 10 2009, 04:07:24 UTC

Thank you - your criticism and praise means a great deal. The problem with that particular part that you did mention was I was trying to fit the attack into three to four pages - and sadly, couldn't give it the time it probably deserved. I constricted myself, and therefore, made it come out that way.

I can only hope to do better in the future, but thank you, again.