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Apr 15, 2007 00:12

Writing is still going very, very slowly. It's like dragging nails down a chalk board and damn if I didn't break those fucking nails. You can't keep me from writing, brain!I may upload a Suigetsu/Sasuke fic later today...if I can stop hating it. Also, may be some Karin/Sasuke/Suigetsu threesome in order. :D ♥ Team Sasuke ( Read more... )

without looking back, naruto, fic

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compagnie April 14 2007, 15:40:50 UTC
Isn't it, though? Love Team Sasuke! :D

Me either (and thanks). Suigetsu/Sasuke = hot.

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bakkhos April 14 2007, 15:39:21 UTC
Team Sasuke fic from you:

ALsjKDhaKJFHN EJLREWL;IQNR;K/LWEHTJQ;WL/'RETNJHJ;WKT4H YESSSSSSSSSS PLZ!

Breathe .... breathe ....

:D :D :D

Sorry, I just had to say that before I read this.

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compagnie April 14 2007, 15:43:29 UTC
AHAHAHAHA. I LOVE YOU. MY WRITING IS KILLING ME (in a bad, painful way). AND PLZ REFRESH, I HAD A VERY STUPID TYPO(S) AT THE END. DDD:

PLZ MAKE HAPPY POST OF THREESOME LOVE TO INSPIRE ME. CAUSE I'M SURE IT WILL.

bad things for you:

Suigetsu’s words echoed in the stillness of the forest around them, broken by the occasional cawing bird and insect. Sasuke let the silence settle before speaking. “Shut up, your opinion of her doesn’t matter. She has something I need.”

“Che, yeah, if you like tits. Girl’s useless at fighting.” Suigetsu sprawled out, the tips of his sandaled toes digging into the dirt around the fire.

(can you tell if i have his voice yet? am dying dying dying even tho you probably can't read anything from that.)

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bakkhos April 14 2007, 15:51:08 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I was just re-reading your past chapters to refresh myself on this story. BUT NOW YOU MUST TELL ME WHAT THE TYPO WAS. Was it as cool as copulation instead of compilation?

IF YOU WANT ME TO WRITE HAPPY THREESOME LOVE, FIND A TEAM SASUKE SEX PIC AND POST IT TO MY LATEST MEME. (That SO wasn't just begging for a Team Sasuke threesome pic.)

I would say get rid of Sasuke saying "Shut up" because it sounds more like him without it. Just like a straight, matter-of-fact "Your opinion doesn't matter." LOL.

;_; What Suigetsu said makes me cry. But it sounds like him, at least. :D

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compagnie April 14 2007, 16:03:12 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA SHUT UP. totally wasn't my fault. for reals. and no, not as cool. unfortunately. i have some of the worst typos ever man, since I don't normally have a beta-reader and just do a quick over by myself. I should probably get me one of those. *lazy*

OH GOD I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A SEXY TEAM SASUKE PIC. surely some of the jap-fans are drawing it out? must. look. hot.

If YOU find such a picture, you must share with me.

fjlkajklf. but doesn't sasuke say shut up a lot now in the manga? or is that just my translation version? for some reason, that stuck out to me so I added the shut up in his speaking. TELL ME THE TRUTH, NOW.

Well, Suigetsu is probably biased, since he seems to hate her. But Naruto manga proves that hate is just another form of love. I mean, gosh, look at Naruto and Sasuke and Sasuke and Itachi. And god, I almost feel dirty for putting Itachi in this fic as a six year old who shall have such a crush on Sasuke. Okay, haha, no I don't but like awesome, yah ( ... )

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proud_snapist April 14 2007, 16:25:23 UTC
Ahhh...I see... I can feel the sort of frustration in Sasuke. I'd've wanted to kill Itachi too. Your Kyuubi is kinda freaky and creepy. Very nicely done! I think this chapter is awesome and you did a great job with it.

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compagnie April 14 2007, 16:29:00 UTC
Thanks so much! Your comment helps me feel a little bit better... Maybe because it was lacking action (and I know what is coming next) it felt too quiet for me. But I am overly pleased that you like Kyuubi as I have soooo much fun writing him this way. Thanks again for your comment!

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fujiappletan April 14 2007, 18:03:52 UTC
Rin appeared at his side, hands fluttering around him until Sasuke smacked them away. “I’m fine,” he said.

I ♥ youuuu, I love this ficccc. Haha, I found it a little funny how Sasuke cares about repaying what he owes. :D?

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compagnie April 15 2007, 01:24:46 UTC
Thank youuuuu! :DDD Makes me happy to know you like it.

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rhole April 14 2007, 23:31:10 UTC
If Sasuke bent down over the lip of the roof, he could unlock the window, brush aside the curtains, and wrap his hands around six-year-old Itachi’s neck.

OH GAWD WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR! BEST LINE EVAR. :3

hana writes again, VICTOLY!

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compagnie April 15 2007, 01:25:49 UTC
WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHAT AM I WAITING FOR? YOU WANT SASUKE TO KILL HIM? Very well, the story will end next chapter with Itachi DYING. :DDD

seriously, maaaaaaan

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