[fanfiction] Fireflies 1/17

Jul 06, 2010 03:03


Title: Fireflies 1/18
Author: twilightrose2
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: sex later on
Summary: In Arthur’s closet, tucked away in the back, next to his stash of cigarettes and whiskey, there are two things. One is an album of pictures he wished was empty and the other was of a leather jacket he swore to never keep. usuk/frukAU
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pairing: usuk, rating: m, fanfiction, pairing: fruk, fandom: axis powers hetalia, series: fireflies, fucking everybody, au, france, america, england

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luciole_solange July 6 2010, 09:09:45 UTC
HA. I'm going to comment even though I've already read this over. Multiple times. And. Over -w-. As I've said, it's absolutely perfect.

I love the detail of the surrounding area, of the Braginskis, and just the wording you used to describe everything. The beginning provide a wonderful hook and the interaction between Francis and Arthur is of course, as always, perfect.

<3 I'm sure everyone will adore this ma belle.

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comptine July 17 2010, 19:35:57 UTC
and I thank you endlessly for reading it over and over <3

Well, as you know, I've been putting a lot of thought and effort into this, it's nice to finally see it coming together <3

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marinoa July 6 2010, 11:23:09 UTC
Ah~ This is beautiful! The way you described Francis and Arthur is just wonderful.

The image of Ivan in frilly apron, being tought about muffins -I simply love it. XD

I'm looking forward to continuation!

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comptine July 17 2010, 19:37:52 UTC
Ah, thank you very much. And yes, Ivan in a pink frilly anything is always lulzy.

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comptine July 17 2010, 19:38:06 UTC
Thank you very much~

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slash4femme July 6 2010, 12:36:46 UTC
I'm loving it already. I've never read anything where Arthur is an artist but I can totally see it and I love your description of the Russian family.

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comptine July 17 2010, 19:39:12 UTC
Yeah, usually Franny is the artist but it's fun messing up the roles once in a while~

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comptine July 17 2010, 19:41:17 UTC
Thank you hubby~

Thank you very much! I keep trying to do better ^^

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