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comptine

[fanfiction] Fireflies 2/17

Jul 13, 2010 04:58

Title: Fireflies 2/18
Author: twilightrose2
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: sex later on
Summary: In Arthur’s closet, tucked away in the back, next to his stash of cigarettes and whiskey, there are two things. One is an album of pictures he wished was empty and the other was of a leather jacket he swore to never keep. usuk/frukAU
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series: fireflies

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comptine July 22 2010, 04:47:29 UTC

I did love working Arthur as an artist, it really fits him in this city and I worked very hard at getting his characterisation right <3

And thank you very much~

rainy_fantasy July 18 2010, 04:41:19 UTC

Ah and it continues! I love your ability to grab your reader's attention even more as the chapters go along. I'm interested in hearing about his past with Alfred and of course his future with this turtle and Francis, ha. Great job and I love your roles for Roderich and Elizaveta! Your descriptions were very good as well, I can already smell the fresh bread and see the townhouse now. :)

comptine July 22 2010, 04:51:39 UTC

Haha, thank you ^^ I really try to do my best when it comes to placing people within the world. I just like to know where they live and fit into the world.

bassist08 July 19 2010, 19:58:19 UTC

Your writing style is very beautiful. The flow of it is very calming and wonderfully descriptive.

I was really excited to see that you posted a new chapter to this :3 and I'm looking forward to reading more.

comptine July 22 2010, 04:52:04 UTC

thank you very much <3

dgraytard July 20 2010, 09:26:49 UTC

i love ur writing style, its so calming yet it gives a sense of curiosity to us readers, its so intricate yet simple enough for us to understand and to keep up without loosing any details- im looking forward to the next one

comptine July 22 2010, 04:53:32 UTC

haha, thank you very much! I've been working on the tone for a very long time

insanityin3d August 4 2010, 17:19:34 UTC

Is it too early in the story to be tearing up? Because I am. I think it's the descriptions, the gorgeous descriptions, which you write as detailed as Arthur's drawings [I suppose].

As I said last chapter, I'm in love. Already. ♥

comptine August 4 2010, 21:28:21 UTC

/gets box of tissues ready. Don't be sad~, but thank you very much, again ^^