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[fanfiction] Inequity and Integrity (for keiko_keket)

Sep 30, 2010 18:55

Title: Inequity and Integrity
Author: twilightrose2
Rating: K
Genre: Romance/Romance/Romanceeee
Warnings: Attempted use of Austenesque writing
Summary: The first time Arthur Kirkland fell for Francis Bonnefoy was based on pure physical attraction. Every other corresponding time after that was over something much more romantic. And Arthur loathed him for this. ( Read more... )

oneshot, gift/request/contest, fanfiction, pairing: fruk, fandom: axis powers hetalia, au, france, rating: k, england

Comments 14

keiko_keket October 1 2010, 03:01:58 UTC

FFFFFF oh my god. Oh my god~ 8D I was having the shittiest day but HOLY GODS ABOVE this made my day! <3 thank you so much! *goes to read it over again*

comptine October 1 2010, 16:04:57 UTC

I'm just so sorry it was so laaaaate <3 I'm thrilled you like it though!

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comptine October 1 2010, 16:05:20 UTC

<3333 YOU REMINDED ME THAT I HAD FICS TO WRITE <33333

queen_celestia October 2 2010, 02:11:00 UTC

Other than needing a quick and dirty beta read I thoroughly enjoyed this. :] Very well put - except the time period might have a few hemming and hawing at gayness.

comptine October 2 2010, 22:26:53 UTC

Shhhh gayness was totally allowed back then |D

But yeah, it does need a quick edit which I will definitely get to... At some point;;

queen_celestia October 3 2010, 06:59:47 UTC

Yeah it totally was. ;DDDD So were double rainbows and unicorns. 8D

souslelys October 2 2010, 04:51:20 UTC

I think you pulled off Austen's style quite well!!

I very much enjoyed Arthur and Francis' dynamic in this one :D It was sweet. The standard propriety among the English makes everything all the more interesting too. And the DANCING, oh the dancing. <3

Had Emma put two people together successfully? From beyond the pages she was still fulfilling her role?
Wonderfully incorporated. Arthur really is just a romantic at heart, isn't he?

comptine October 2 2010, 22:29:46 UTC

Ahh, thank you~ I tried hard for it and she's got quite the tone to follow XD

YES, DANCING ALWAYS MAKES A GOOD FIC <3

And we all know Arthur just wants someone to sweep him off his feet~

canako October 3 2010, 22:07:40 UTC

8D fff amazing. I love the style and well... I love everything about this story actually.
Your Arthur is always such a hopeless romantic at heart haha. Oh gosh, I missed your fics.

comptine October 4 2010, 09:50:08 UTC

He is a hopefully romantic and that's why he's so adorable. And I'm hoping to get back into the writing lark, I've got some time~