[fanfiction] Fireflies 5/17

[comptine]

Title: Fireflies 5/18
Author: twilightrose2
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: sex later on
Summary: In Arthur’s closet, tucked away in the back, next to his stash of cigarettes and whiskey, there are two things. One is an album of pictures he wished was empty and the other was of a leather jacket he swore to never keep. usuk/

Comments

[yuuko_81]

I'm glad you updated! I've re-read the whole thing. I know this is a FrUk story but I'm dreading the break-up between Francis and Antonio... Philip the turtle is going to be sad! And poor Arthur too! I liked your description of Yao's family a lot, so sweet!

[comptine]

I had to re-read it too to make sure I was doing things right XD;

I know, it's going to be kinda scary, but it will be fore a pretty good reason so /3\

[allyoucaneater]

*flies to you and glomps*

I'M GOING TO GROW ON YOU AS A TUMOR BECAUSE I LOVE YOU SO YOU CAN'T AND WILL NEVER GET RID OF ME *snuggles*

;w; Oh Artie... Can I chuck a rock into Alfred's head? I like Alfred, but kjbvdxfkhbd >:V he deserves it for hurting Arthur

[comptine]

YOU WILL BE AN AWESOME GROWTH /3/ And don't worry, I'll feed you and everything!

You can chuck rocks ALL YOU WANT

[franceismyhomie]

Omgosh, if Maddox is from SpokenThroughWrittenWords, then I may just love you to bits and pieces :D

And man, I love the Asian family dynamic. It just seems so...familial. Like, I want to jump into the story and take on Mei's side and fight against Yao's strictness over her dating the Danish [btw Denmark/Taiwan? Lol whut?]. It's so awesome :D

I can't wait to read more. AND OMGOSH PRUSSIA? I'll pray for it~

[comptine]

Ahhh- I don't know if it is XD I just used the name because someone who I rp with uses it. /which is also why Wang "Maddox" Zhi is his full name. I COULD NEVER NAME HIM.

They are so fun to write. I wasn't expecting to pull it off but apparently it worked [and I honestly don't know where Taiwan/Denmark came from, it just kinda happened]

YES. PRUSSIA.

[artist]

Let it be known that I love your characterization of Arthur and just how realistic his depression is. And how he seems to slowly be coming out of it, but still hanging onto the threads, which is realistic and I love it.

Also, don't be worried about "filler" chapters as they can be just as important as "plot" chapters in giving more insight into a character's life and background, showing them as a whole person instead of just the little bit of a life story that we enjoy as readers. And with this chapter, we meet the Yao family, which seems to have an impact on Arthur's life, so they are important and needed to be introduced at some point and sometimes the earlier the better so it's not forced.

I'll definitely be following this fic from now on! Keep up the amazing work!

[comptine]

guuh, I'm glad I'm writing that correctly. I'm not exactly a sad person and trying to write Arthur as a mopey and sad bastard is really hard sometimes.

YEAH. I HONESTLY LOVE FILLER CHAPTERS, just not the best to pick up on when I want to get to the action XD

I hope to see more of your comments in the future then~!