[fanfiction] Fireflies 7/17

[comptine]

Title: Fireflies 7/18
Author: twilightrose2
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: sex later on
Summary: In Arthur’s closet, tucked away in the back, next to his stash of cigarettes and whiskey, there are two things. One is an album of pictures he wished was empty and the other was of a leather jacket he swore to never keep. usuk/frukAU
Note: In

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[allyoucaneater]

durrr your layout doesn't have a MEM button *wants to*

[comptine]

I changed it. JUST FOR YOU MY LUB.

[allyoucaneater]

OH BBY YOU'RE TOO KIND TO ME /makes love to/

[artist]

I love how Arthur is having a crisis about liking Francis, even though he now knows that his crush is being cheated on? I'm, not sure if I'm just being insanely dense, or if Antonio and Francis' relationship is rather on vague terms. Either way, I love the way the characters are all dancing the waltz with no idea who's in the lead.

And congratulations on the 100th post!

[comptine]

Ah- Antonio isn't cheating on Francis XD he's just an assistant to Lovino, more of a big brother than anything, but Francis gets jealous of how much time they spend together.

[comptine]

HELL YES AN UPDATE. I will finish this story if it kills me!

[comptine]

I DID. AND I AM SO EXCITED AND- DERIDEJLASKJDN <3

[la_grand_vie]

hurrr. The USUK is totally worth the rest of this. God I love crushing!Arthur sooooo hard.

SOOOOOOO HARD.

And I'm so angsting about not getting first comment because I passed out |D;;

BUHHHHHHHH. /will be bugging you to write more >>;;

ESPECIALLY WITH WHAT'S COMING UP. LET ME BETA. PLEASE /pleads

[comptine]

I know you do /____= /WRITES IT JUST FOR YOU <3~!

you did kind of stay up the night before XD

you can beta all you want /3/

[mortkero]

Congrats on 100 posts!

Hey it's great that you've been getting back into writing this again! Arthur is too cute, and I liked the US/UK description at the start of the chapter.

I can't quite believe that Arthur practically offered to stay (for nooky) and Francis turned him down! That's just wrong, esp if Francis knew the signals.

A small not, I've noticed more typos in the latest chapters than I remember seeing in the first few, and they do jolt me out of the reading experience a tad. It might be worth getting a beta to read through your chapters before posting.

[comptine]

I know! I'm so excited to be back on the writing boat you don't even know XD And Francis does know the signals, he's just very loyal to Toni (like a good boyfriend)

THAT'S BECAUSE I USUALLY POST THEM AT 2AM AND AT TWO AM MY BRAIN DOESN'T PROCESS SPELLING ERRORS.

XD. I usually go back and correct the next day because at 2am I am a terrible editor. But I will get on that <3

[mortkero]

Your method sounds suspiciously like mine!

Well I have faith that Francis will cave next time XD

Arthur is probably releasing a heck of a lot of sexy 'why are you doing me now?' pheromones and the attraction will be too much for both of them to resist.

[comptine]

XD I think most authors subscribe to it.

soon hopefully. Still need to see where this story is going which is allllllll over the map XD