[fanfiction] What the Heart Forgets - Goodbye

Mar 29, 2011 00:22


Title: Goodbye
Author: comptine
Rating: M
Genre: Romance/Drama
Warnings: sex/puddles of angst
Summary: There is a distinct difference between a goodbye and au revoir, as one lasts forever while the other promises that there will never be an ending.
Note: Written for one of the most influential fruk writers out there, a final thank you.

You say yes; I say no. )

canada, rating: m, series: what the heart forgets, fanfiction, pairing: fruk, face, fandom: axis powers hetalia, france, america, england

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hideincarnate March 29 2011, 18:55:39 UTC
This fic was amazing. It was eloquent, it was beautiful and it was just a great story.

I will have to read the fic that inspired you to write this.

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I totally spent, like, five minutes just watching your icon *A* comptine March 30 2011, 17:37:39 UTC
Thank you very much~ And if I can direct you to the series that inspired me, you can find it here~

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It does that to people. XD I like your icon too though! *A* hideincarnate March 30 2011, 21:15:47 UTC
Apparently, I've read all of it already! So I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! =;(

If only there was more...or I guess more fanfic based off of that fic. XD;

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comptine March 31 2011, 18:33:32 UTC
:'| that moment where you realise you've already read all of WtHF. Yeah, more people need to know about it for sure

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daffodil_brill March 29 2011, 22:21:14 UTC
Oh, my heart.

This was absolutely beautiful. I wish I could pinpoint an exact place, but--your repetition, your choice of language...well done. <3

I had stories I still wanted to tell for this AU--and I want to believe I'm getting to the point where I can tell them again. I'm in a better place now than I was weeks ago. And I've learned lessons from my experiences. I'm not there yet, but--I will be.

And you helped with that a little.

Thank you. 'Til our next meeting. <3

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comptine March 30 2011, 17:43:20 UTC
kmaksjnd YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW GLAD I AM THAT YOU LIKED IT /huge weight off my shoulders.

I know you did bro, and I was so sad when you said that you were leaving the verse, so I wrote my final say :U I wasn't really expecting you to consider coming back, but if you do, KNOW THAT I'M ON BOARD o7

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franceismyhomie March 29 2011, 22:48:43 UTC
Oh lord this story is just so realistic yet so heartbreaking and gah, I couldn't look away while reading it - at ALL.

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comptine March 30 2011, 17:45:07 UTC
Thank you /3/ it's hard writing Arthur and Francis fighting about this kinda stuff rather then the usual things XD

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fireblazie March 29 2011, 22:50:54 UTC
Oh. Oh. The What the Heart Forgets series is one of my absolute favorites, ever, and I was ridiculously excited when I saw this posted.

No armies at a standstill, no colonies bristling against each other. Just raw human stupidity keeping them apart and it drives Arthur up the wall. This. I just, I don't even know. Perfect. I am so glad you wrote this - it's brilliant. ♥

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comptine March 30 2011, 17:45:55 UTC
I know right!? I think it's a fan favourite and I've always loved it and I wanted to post a final goodbye~

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canako April 5 2011, 19:59:44 UTC
I wanted to try writing some eloquent comment, but then the A/N and I've burst out crying and stuff. This AU always makes me so tearful ಥ_ಥ I'm always so happy when WtHF spin-offs suddenly pop up in this fandom. I'll never ever have enough of this AU.

And I've always really loved your writing, but, wow, you have improved a lot. And this story is amazing. And even Matthew is so perfect and wonderfully awkward despite not saying a single word haha I admit I've always been secretly intrigued by the twins in this AU. Kinda wish they appeared more often. Thank you for writing and sharing this ♥

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comptine April 5 2011, 22:37:32 UTC
It always makes me cry too;; /not my story, but the AU :U. AND I GET SO HAPPY TOO, I wish more people would write for it, it's just a fantastic series~!

/3\ Thank you so much, I've been trying to balance school and writing and sometimes it just doesn't work, so this is nice to hear :U. And I've been on an awkward Canada phase recently soooo <3

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