I was super curious how you would approach the theme, with the previews and all, but this story got me hooked very much like what Francis' novel did to Arthur. Changing the twins from the usual stereotype serves for excellent dynamics, your writing is highest class as always and can't wait doesn't even remotely express how much I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Aw, this was a nice read! I really like the idea of it, both Arthur and Francis are perfect in their roles and I just can see the Englishman getting lost in the novel's plot, refusing to admit he's actually grateful to be able to read Francis' novel XD And I also liked how you switched to having Matt beside Arthur and Al beside Francis. I haven't read many Francis&Alfred interactions but their short talk here was enough to make me become fond of the idea, ahah~
This review was written for Recensioni di Primavera @ maridichallenge.
THIS WAS MY PROMPT and even though I know this isn't any "write for the prompter" I was incredibly happy to see that you were the one to claim my prompt. And W O W, this is amazing. I am in love with this AU already. You took my idea to places I didn't even imagine, and it is extremely beautiful and if I could hug a fic I would hug this one. I, as the others, adore how you slip up the "regular" FACE-pairs. Arthur and Matthew compliment each other, just like Francis and Alfred. Your characterisation is flawless as always, I love how Arthur refuses to admit that he likes the book, and your Francis is just.... Francis. The part with Alfred's French is probably what made me smile the most, as it is a situation I find myself in a lot here in France. So just! lots of kudos and love and hearts! can't wait for the next part(s)!
I love the way how Arthur was hooked / "seduced" / lured by Francis' novel but still refused to acknowledge it. The other neighours have already written what i'd like to say, and I agreed with their comments. I just what to say this is good, reallyy really good and beautifully written~~ ^.^
why i never found this before today - almost a year later is besides me, but man, this is certainly a very good beginning and im really curious to see what you do next with it, if you continue it haha. i absolutely love the way you write :)
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I was super curious how you would approach the theme, with the previews and all, but this story got me hooked very much like what Francis' novel did to Arthur. Changing the twins from the usual stereotype serves for excellent dynamics, your writing is highest class as always and can't wait doesn't even remotely express how much I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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And I also liked how you switched to having Matt beside Arthur and Al beside Francis. I haven't read many Francis&Alfred interactions but their short talk here was enough to make me become fond of the idea, ahah~
This review was written for Recensioni di Primavera @ maridichallenge.
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I, as the others, adore how you slip up the "regular" FACE-pairs. Arthur and Matthew compliment each other, just like Francis and Alfred. Your characterisation is flawless as always, I love how Arthur refuses to admit that he likes the book, and your Francis is just.... Francis.
The part with Alfred's French is probably what made me smile the most, as it is a situation I find myself in a lot here in France. So just! lots of kudos and love and hearts! can't wait for the next part(s)!
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Can't wait for the next update.
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