xxxholic; barcode, part iii; doumeki, watanuki; r

[con_noncuranza]

fandom: xxxHOLiC
story: barcode
summary: like anyone else who does not have a soul, you cannot stand anyone who has too much of one [doumeki, watanuki, violence, creepiness, weirdness]
notes: Guys, it gets really creepy here. Seriously. Living up to an R rating and everything. Also, character death. Fai's death, actually. Just to let you know. And

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[eoedad]

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I don't know what to say. Really. This was-- a little confusing, I guess, because I have to work to remember who's who, but still awesome.

"love," ni says. "love."

"what's that?"

I think I loved that line best of all. It's so sad, but... beautiful, a little bit. *wipes at tears* Anyway, thank you for sharing, and update soon, please!

[con_noncuranza]

Yeah, the who's who thing I debated a lot over. Eventually, I decided to keep it a little confusing, not mention names so much, because this Doumeki and Watanuki see themselves not so much necessarily to seperate entities, but as one thing in two bodies--which I think will end up changing at some point later on, but they're C, not Shizuka and Kimihiro. Especially at this point in the game. The prose is starting to even out in the next couple of parts, so hopefully it won't be as confusing. :D

Thank you so much! XDDD

[smokexscribbles]

Hehehe I love this story so much. I think I missed commenting on the last chapter, but yeah, lots of love for the holy shit creepy stories. Yay!

[nebulia]

Thank you!

Hehe, I like creepy stories too, but this is the first time I've ever gotten somewhere while writing one.

And I totally have no clue what will happen next, lol. XP

[chaotic_cupcake]

(TT_TT)
This is so scary and depressing and I can't wait for more! The disjointed confusion and struggled thoughts really get the mood so perfectly creepy and yeah.

<3 I love the horror-feel you give to this. I'm sooo hooked.

[lunargeography]

*shivers*

Dark and compelling. Kind of a can't look away quality to it... I want to know what happens, but I can't see it being good. Damn good writing.

[nebulia]

Thank you! That's very much what I was going for.

Thanks for commenting! You made my day. :D