xxxholic; barcode, pt. iv; doumeki/watanuki; r

Sep 10, 2008 20:58

fandom: xxxHOLiC
story: barcode
summary: like anyone else who does not have a soul, you cannot stand anyone who has too much of one [doumeki, watanuki, violence, creepiness, weirdness]
notes/warnings: um...not much. random extra!death and non-explicit mentions of sex.

part one
part two
part three

I need you, they don't say )

fandom: xxxholic, rating: r, char: watanuki, wip, char: doumeki, char: kyle, story: barcode

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smokexscribbles September 11 2008, 02:43:03 UTC
I- Guh. You've outdone yourself. Best chapter so far in my opinion, I love the disjointed thoughts and the confusion. Great, great darkfic - We don't get enough in this fandom. Thank you for the great read, I might have to mem this.

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nebulia September 11 2008, 02:44:36 UTC
Thank you!

Yeah, I love darkfic, and I'm so pleased that this is turning out, as usually my darkfic is phail. XD

There definitely needs to be more darkfic in this fandom. Holic can be really dark sometimes; let's take advantage of that! :D

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smokexscribbles September 11 2008, 02:53:25 UTC
I know, we all read this fabulously creepy manga, and nobody takes advantage of that. HE IS FRIENDS WITH A GIRL WHO ALMOST KILLED HIM. And that's AWESOME.

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nebulia September 11 2008, 02:57:30 UTC
I know! And Watanuki pretty much vampired half of Doumeki's blood out of his body, and Doumeki's still like, Doumeki! And Yuuko is always spouting creepy destiny shit! And the whole spirit woman thing! C'mon, people, embrace the creepy!

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tomoyohime8 September 11 2008, 09:38:38 UTC
wow.

words fail me. all i can say is that i love it. you described the setting perfectly, that dark! world they live in. i like this kimihiro a lot - he's so different from other au!kimihiro's.

you made me feel the story, not just read about it.

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nebulia September 11 2008, 12:42:17 UTC
Wow! Thanks!

Haha, that's because he's high 70% of the time. XDDD But no, thanks! I'm really glad you like him. :D

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iambickilometer September 13 2008, 06:09:25 UTC
oh my god. I... can't believe I missed this utter beauty, this thing of wonder.

THIS IS WHAT I GET FOR LEAVING FANDOM. EVEN TEMPORARILY.

But yeah, you've just basically won the award for Best Fucking AU Ever.

I LOVE IT. SO HARD.

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nebulia September 15 2008, 19:11:41 UTC
*blush*

Thank you!

(and yeah, you miss a lot when you leave fandom *cough cough* XDDDDD)

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iambickilometer September 15 2008, 20:57:13 UTC
You're welcome. (And I certainly do. But I repented! That's good, right?)

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