Oh my god, this was awesome. XD I love the interactions and the characterizations. I adored Nezach, and I'm so glad you're continuing Tiphereth. Asch's reaction to Mieu is utterly adorable, and his interaction with Arietta was very interesting. I can't wait to read more.
The subject line about sums it up. I love Nezach, and then I was randomly browsing the memories at belovedkuzu when I found this. It made my day, it really did. Is this going to be continued? Perhaps as this years NaNo project?
Very, very well written. First I read Nezarach and gape at how much the words flow together, and then I read this, and gape at how well you keep Asch in character while he's with the group...He cares, and yet he doesn't show it. He snaps at Luke just as much as he had in the past, but it seems more like brotherly squabble now.
Do hope you don't mind that I added you to my friends' list. I'm the random person that PMed you on ff.net just out of the blue, if you remember. If not, that's understandable lol.
And Asch wasn't the only one in character...you seem to be flawless at preserving each character's personality. Awesome~
Ah, I love it when Anise's mouth is allowed to run off. XDDD I was laughing so hard while Anise and Natalia squabbled over Luke in the anime last night, and now I get more of her in your wonderful fic. ♥
Asch~~~ ♥♥♥♥ Now I'm wondering just how many different makeshift pillows Asch has!! XDDD
Mieu's final line just killed me. Soooooooooo cute!
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Love the interaction between Asch and Arietta, and Luke and Asch always finding something to bitch about.
Oh dearie me. Guy's flashing, isn't he? PTSD TIEM PLZKTHX!
Ohhhh~ can't wait for more!!!!!
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Do hope you don't mind that I added you to my friends' list. I'm the random person that PMed you on ff.net just out of the blue, if you remember. If not, that's understandable lol.
And Asch wasn't the only one in character...you seem to be flawless at preserving each character's personality. Awesome~
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Asch~~~ ♥♥♥♥
Now I'm wondering just how many different makeshift pillows Asch has!! XDDD
Mieu's final line just killed me. Soooooooooo cute!
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