This is excellent o_o so cute and then so angsty, I LOVE it! The rhythm you settled for this story is perfect, everything flows really well. And the end <3 amazing. Oh, you have to write more!
You know, I'm fighting really hard not to take a look at the prompts over inception_kink because I know I'd have to write something. I still have a bigbang challenge to finish (using the icon just to remind myself), and I've got work till summer's over :( But as soon as I'm free, I'll be writing the hell out of those two boys &hearts
Eames would call him beautiful under his breath in a crowded subway car, and Arthur would smile silently to himself, feeling content. At first I was like :D and then I was like D:. You hit my kink in the best of ways, even though I'm pouting at my screen, yelling 'fix Arthur!.' (But he lends himself so well to angst, doesn't he?) And as another user said, the story has excellent pacing & imagery as well. I look forward to reading more of your writing!
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IT'S JUST FACT. D:
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But as soon as I'm free, I'll be writing the hell out of those two boys &hearts
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- OP
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And I'm sorry I broke him. I promise I'll get you a new one soon. XD He's just so much fun to abuse.
Thank you.
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Pardon my language.
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Yaaaaaay! I love the internet, and your heart!
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